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For Richer or Poorer - NC17 - Chloe/Oliver - Part Six

Mar 04, 2011 10:38

Title: For Richer or Poorer
Category: Smallville
Genre: Romance/Drama/Humor/Action
Ship: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: NC17
Spoiler(s): Season 6 - Arrow
Word Count: 5,271
Summary: (AU) Oliver Queen, former journalist and current computer specialist, has met his match in Chloe Sullivan, billionaire CEO and secret leather-wearing vigilante.

Previous: Part One, Part ( Read more... )

fic: for richer or poorer, novel - smallville - chlollie, author: sarcastic_fina, ship: chloe/oliver

Comments 17

kaylaclaus March 6 2011, 03:52:22 UTC

Lordy! You are such a brilliant writer! The level of detail in these characters is perfect. I adore the way you get inside their brains and breathe life into their thoughts and dialogue. I am especially impressed with Chloe and Oliver's musings on power and wealth, very intersting and observant. And the role reversal is so charming! And I love the build up of both their characters, it's so deliciously well paced... I literally am salivating for another chapter here:) Awesome work, these two are just so adorable!

juju84 March 6 2011, 12:34:00 UTC

Absolutely love it!! I'd say continue but I really want to see continuation of OLaf and The War of Fate! (and the was some promise of Chloe/Damon story as well ^_^) So i don't know, you should probably do what you feel you want to.

camfan4ever March 8 2011, 01:50:48 UTC

Sweetness. I'm so in love with this, the banter between Ollie and Lois and the Chloe and Clark arguement were spot on. Can't wait for more!

phoenix_173 March 8 2011, 07:23:22 UTC

Yay! Wonderful updates. I love this fic.

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svgurl March 19 2011, 00:34:48 UTC

All right, I'm all caught up. This chapter was just as amazing as the rest. I was looking forward to how you would handle the Green Arrow/Clark meeting from 'Arrow' and it was really good. I like how you tweaked the dialogue but it still flowed perfectly.

The Martha/Ollie and the Lois/Ollie conversations were great.

Hands on her hips, Lois nodded. "Yeah, and lemme tell you… when I get my hands on this leather-wearing Amazon woman, she is going to be sorry… Nobody messes with my future mother-in-law."
Oliver choked on a snort. "Does Clark know you're already planning your wedding?"LOL Oh Lois. She's crazy but I love her for it. Fortunately, she snagged herself a farm boy who's rather traditional himself, even if he does disappear a lot ( ... )