Freudian E-slip: Presenting Sex Online

[sareth]

This is my big mondo senior project I've been talking about, hinting at, or generally going insane over for the past several months. It's due Monday evening. I've run through several drafts, and at this point I feel like letting you all see what MAY be the final product.

If you see things needing changing, please feel free to hit me up! Also, if

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General comment

[anonymous]

There is a general and frequent change between using the term "sex" and "gender". The outline above shows a change between title, "Presenting Sex Online" and Appendix A "How to Present Gender". Seems to me that a wholesale change from "Sex" to "Gender" would be appropriate. It took me a few lines to understand that you were discussing gender rather than intercourse, which sometimes seems to be too often presented online.

Spenser

Re: General comment

[sareth]

Thanks dad

Re: General comment

[anonymous]

Yes, that helps. Maybe the explanation should include indicating that the issues that stem from "gender-bending" are left to the sociologists, and that the matter of study is only the intent to deceive the online community.

Spenser

[instigator_ash]

Fascinating. This was really interesting to read. I have a new respect for how hard this stuff is to work.

[kheldarthedwarf]

This was interesting stuff. Good job! Would you mind posting a link on my website? I know some people there would find it interesting...

[sareth]

Not at all.