Thanks for reading and for the comment! Yeah Maki's just like that.. *kicks Maki* but the story needs it so we'll have to bear with hos...attitude towards Jae.
I love how Fox Rain is the epitome of a family and Maze is just not... With Maki there, I don't think they'll ever be close to being a family. The smut was definitely good though. But I still feel that Maki isn't really into it. He just does it with Jae because of the sex and not Jae... If you get what I'm saying... It's good though because it shows that you're not writing the smut blindly, you're also taking into consideration the characters and the plot ^^. Very well written! Jae is very ... yea ><. I don't know the word for it but this: "I want Maki to notice only me, to remember only me, I want him to have only me. Only me." was shocking and rather disappointing... Jae's possessive ways over Maki are a lot scarier than Maki's possessiveness over Jae ><. Jae is using some dirty tricks to get Maki's attention and it bothers me... I can't wait to see how you form the YunJae with Jaejoong being so hopelessly "in love" with Maki.
=) Thanks for reading and definitely thank you for your comment!
writing this smut part is actually kinda hard for me (but thanks to my betas) because I am used to reading YunJae sexy time youknooow but we'll have to bear with that because that was how the story progresses. ;) and yeah Jae.. =__= *sighs*
I will update soon and there'll be YunJae in it! Thanks again!
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anyway! Thanks for reading and thanks for the comment! i'll update soon so see you there again!
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Yeah Maki's just like that.. *kicks Maki* but the story needs it so we'll have to bear with hos...attitude towards Jae.
Thanks! And I'll update soon!
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With Maki there, I don't think they'll ever be close to being a family.
The smut was definitely good though. But I still feel that Maki isn't really into it. He just does it with Jae because of the sex and not Jae... If you get what I'm saying... It's good though because it shows that you're not writing the smut blindly, you're also taking into consideration the characters and the plot ^^. Very well written!
Jae is very ... yea ><. I don't know the word for it but this: "I want Maki to notice only me, to remember only me, I want him to have only me. Only me." was shocking and rather disappointing... Jae's possessive ways over Maki are a lot scarier than Maki's possessiveness over Jae ><. Jae is using some dirty tricks to get Maki's attention and it bothers me...
I can't wait to see how you form the YunJae with Jaejoong being so hopelessly "in love" with Maki.
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writing this smut part is actually kinda hard for me (but thanks to my betas) because I am used to reading YunJae sexy time youknooow but we'll have to bear with that because that was how the story progresses. ;) and yeah Jae.. =__= *sighs*
I will update soon and there'll be YunJae in it! Thanks again!
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Looking forward to the YunJae~♥
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