"Miracle Springs" - Death Note Fan Fiction

[sashocirrione]

Fandom: Death Note, which includes the manga and the anime.

Title: "Miracle Springs"

Author: Sashocirrione

Spoilers: MAJOR Spoilers for everything up to nearly the end of the entire series.

Rating: M for mature or probably NC-17

Warnings: NO UNDERAGE READERS. Rated M for a reason. Sexual activities.

Summary: Mikami and Sayu have an

Comments

[rinhail]

Defintiely strange, but your writing makes the pairing work. :)

[sashocirrione]

Thank you, I really tried to make it work. And it was a sad ending because I couldn't imagine those two in a long-term relationship, or imagine that Mikami would help Sayu in any way other than briefly.

[rootkitten]

I decided to browse ff.net's M section for once and happened on this story. (Frankly speaking, I don't even remember when I read fanfiction last, let alone reviewing...)

Anyway, I just want to say that I liked the character study you produced there, liked a lot. Your interpretation of the nature of Sayu's dismal plight seems quite apt. I believe I never looked at the situation from this point of view, but come to think of it, that makes good sense. And the "hot scene" was... graphic but delicate at the same time. Misty I would say :)

Also, I'm amending my neglect and friending your journal right away!

[sashocirrione]

Wow, thanks so much!

I'd been a little worried that the angst and religious themes would put people off, but so far it's been mostly enthusiasm.

[honoumiko]

IIIIT WAAAAS YOOOOOOUUUUU

<333 Love this fic so much.

[sashocirrione]

Oh, thanks

[sashocirrione]

"If so, don't work about subconscious leeching" should be "If so, don't worry about subconscious leeching", sorry about the typo.

[honoumiko]

I agree!! I just feel sort of headdesky if I realize my idea isn't as innovative as I thought. But as someone told me, that usually means you're doing it right. XD