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sassyjumper

Fic: Conversion Disorder

Feb 15, 2013 12:12

Title: Conversion Disorder
Characters: House, Wilson, S8 team
Rating: PG-13
Words: about 4,800
Warnings: Valentine's Day
Summary: Sequel to That Mythical Thing, wherein House gave Wilson a second ten-day challenge. This is what happened next. Written for the house_wilson Dropped Plotline Challenge - Valentine's Day version

( I fully intend to meet your deadline )

domestic bliss series, fanfiction

Comments 31

chocolate_frapp February 16 2013, 15:49:25 UTC

oh, i absolutely love this! I can see and hear the whole thing in my head.

sassyjumper February 16 2013, 19:38:39 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

rockhummer February 17 2013, 19:24:26 UTC

Thank you for writing a sequel. Brilliant story and it is such a treat for Valentine's day, even a late one :) Dialogues are perfect, bittersweet and very right, I can recognise them in every word, can feel their irritation, pain, love, uncertainty. Wonderful story! You made me very happy

sassyjumper February 17 2013, 23:41:47 UTC

Thanks so much. Glad it made you happy :D

barefootpuddles February 21 2013, 03:47:50 UTC

This was a great read. I printed it out and took it with me to the gym yesterday to read while I cycled and was so glad I did. Totally distracted me.

And yay! for Wilson not being a goat anymore - he was the brave one after all. :)

You kept them so in character too:

Wilson’s eyebrows shot up. “This is a date?”

House shrugged. “Feels like one. Well, almost. You still have to let me touch your boobs.”

LOL!

sassyjumper February 22 2013, 02:37:49 UTC

I'm glad it helped you through cycling :D I've never had the patience for gym equipment of any kind.

Thanks for reading!

flywoman November 27 2013, 19:08:18 UTC

Came over to read this after spotting it on yarroway's rec list.

Ah yes, Dee's challenge. (This even prompted me to go back and read my own response, which turned into a huge angst fest despite my best efforts.)

I gather from your remarks that this was an early effort, and I suppose that I can tell, just a little bit, in that I think you nail their voices even better now. But I still thoroughly enjoyed this :).

My absolute favorite bit was

“I noticed. Smooth as a baby’s bottom.” House waggled his eyebrows. “I can only imagine how smooth your bottom must be.”

Wilson’s cheeks reddened, and House held up a hand. “Sorry-too fast? I mean, I know we’ve only known each other for twenty-one years.”

sassyjumper December 2 2013, 01:39:37 UTC

Well, it's not really an early effort -- more like dead in the middle. Which is why my memory of it was a bit fuzzy. :)

Thank you for reading! I haven't started on yarroway's list yet b/c I made a resolution to actually read The New Yorker cover to cover this week. That hasn't worked out yet, either.

Anyway, can't wait to read yours and the others she rec'd!