Comments | sassyjumper: Ficlet: Post-Misery Syndrome

sassyjumper

Ficlet: Post-Misery Syndrome

Mar 02, 2013 14:18

Title: Post-Misery Syndrome
Characters: House/Wilson, est.
Rating: PG-13
Words: about 1,500
Warnings: Some fluff included
Summary: Wilson is peeing a lot. House must know why. (I think it's better than this summary implies.)

( You're monitoring my bathroom trips? )

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Comments 37

menolly_au March 2 2013, 19:56:17 UTC

I was thinking the other day if we ever had a discussion about what we liked in fanfic one of my things would be snarky dialogue and narration but with some underlying ~deeper meaning and warmth. So this fits my bill entirely :) Loved it from Wilson's first line

“You’re right. It’s getting out of hand. I’ve been breathing a lot lately, too.”

Wonderful portrayal of House's obsessiveness (and his ability to diagnose :). Wilson being embarrassed because he's lowering his dose of anti-depressants because he's actually happy is great. And I like the bit at the end with House acknowledging Wilson's own need for monitoring.

“’Cause you know what’s awesome for SSRI discontinuation syndrome? Piano sex.”

You do know you're going to get requests for the awesome piano sex don't you? ;)

superseal March 3 2013, 18:41:14 UTC

"You do know you're going to get requests for the awesome piano sex don't you? ;)"

Seconded lol ;-)

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:44:37 UTC

I'm with you -- surface snark with something deeper is one of my faves :)

Hmm, I don't know if I have the...technical know-how to write good piano sex :o

Thanks so much for reading!

ext_989538 March 2 2013, 22:24:10 UTC

Dialogue is perfect. I could hear both House and Wilson's voices in my head as I read it. So glad we are still getting great fanfics. Thanks

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:45:33 UTC

Thank you for reading -- Glad you liked it!

yarroway March 2 2013, 22:24:36 UTC

I love the relationship here. It's very them. The banter is great too, and their shamefaced admissions of happiness. I think you nailed the way they interconnect, with House's stalking and Wilson's need to be stalked.

This made me all kinds of happy.

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:46:59 UTC

I'm so glad it made you all kinds of happy :)

Thank you for reading!

batsublue March 2 2013, 22:53:27 UTC

Excellent fic! :)

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:47:31 UTC

Thank you! On a different, I adore your icon....

srsly_yes March 3 2013, 00:34:24 UTC

How lucky are we to enjoy the fruits of your labor in such a palatable form? Your show-like, dead-on banter makes it easy to believe slash exists between our two favorite doctors. Kudos!

And on purely a shallow note: happy pee!

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:48:56 UTC

Ha, happy pee! I just really liked the idea of Wilson being forced to admit he's happy due to excessive urination ;)

Thanks so much for reading!