Comments | sassyjumper: Ficlet: Post-Misery Syndrome

sassyjumper

Ficlet: Post-Misery Syndrome

Mar 02, 2013 14:18

Title: Post-Misery Syndrome
Characters: House/Wilson, est.
Rating: PG-13
Words: about 1,500
Warnings: Some fluff included
Summary: Wilson is peeing a lot. House must know why. (I think it's better than this summary implies.)

( You're monitoring my bathroom trips? )

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Comments 37

writerdot March 3 2013, 01:55:03 UTC

I swear my breath catches when I see you've written something even though I am sometimes a really bad commenter. I get so excited. And of course, this was no different. Your House/Wilson banter continues to amaze me. It's sexy as hell too. :-D

Great job, doll. :-)

ETA: Because I would like to echo the request for piano sex. :-D

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:50:46 UTC

Aw, you're so sweet -- And you are not a bad commenter, lol.

I don't know if I have the skills for depicting piano sex -- it's a little intimidating :p

Thank you for reading!

brindlewolf March 3 2013, 03:28:45 UTC

I love this ♥ As everyone else stated, it's so totally IC and the voices ring so true that it is completely believable as canon. ♥

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:52:56 UTC

So glad you liked it -- Thank you!

alternatealto March 3 2013, 04:04:27 UTC

I read the summary for this and said, "Well, of course he must!"

This is such a perfect depiction of their relationship: House obsessed with Wilson, Wilson pretending not to enjoy the way that House is obsessed with him, and both of them saying so much more than it sounds like on the surface. And all done so perfectly I could hear and see them both as if I were watching an episode!

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:56:40 UTC

Wilson pretending not to enjoy the way that House is obsessed with him

Oh, he totally enjoys it. He's just playing hard-to-stalk.

Thank you for reading!

chocolate_frapp March 3 2013, 06:57:07 UTC

this was fantastic, especially the dialogue.

(wouldn't piano sex hurt?)

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:57:50 UTC

(wouldn't piano sex hurt?)

I imagine it depends on how you do it. ;)

Thanks for reading!

discofunction March 3 2013, 10:45:00 UTC

This is like a perfect House/Wilson slash fic!!! It's brilliant, I loved it!!! Their dialogue was spot on - every one of their lines were perfect- exactly how I would imagine them to respond or react! Of course, there is also a medical mystery which House solves throughout the course of it! Oh and mention of piano sex!

PERFECT!

*adds to mems*

sassyjumper March 3 2013, 20:58:37 UTC

Aw, a mem? Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :D