Fic: Nice Work If You Can Get It

Jul 08, 2013 17:53

Title: Nice Work If You Can Get It
Characters: House, Wilson
Rating: PG-13
Words: 4,500
Summary: House catches his first case; Wilson flirts with people. Part of a series of post-finale Tiny House stories.

You’re not learning how to be a P.I. from Tom Selleck )

fanfiction, tiny house series

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mrsdelle July 10 2013, 10:05:26 UTC
Perfection, as always!!!

I've said it once, I've said it twice, and I'll say it again: best House-fics ever! :D

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART PLEASE DON'T BE LONG :O :* XD <3

Ps. The ending pleasantly reminded me of "Black Hole". I'm sure everybody knows why... ;)

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sassyjumper July 10 2013, 15:45:26 UTC
Oh, I definitely had that episode in the back of my mind when I wrote that little scene. ;)

Thanks for reading!

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zebra363 July 10 2013, 11:19:51 UTC
I was happy that House got a medical puzzle to solve!

On one hand, he did not like the gleam he was seeing in Wilson’s eyes; on the other hand, he liked it a lot.

You have such a deft touch at expressing House's feelings for Wilson.

Wonderful instalment, as always!

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sassyjumper July 10 2013, 15:46:26 UTC
I think House was happy it was a medical puzzle, too.

Thank you for reading!

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rslhilson July 11 2013, 00:19:43 UTC
Brilliant as always! I consider us readers very lucky that House and Wilson won't STFU and that you are there to capture their words perfectly :)

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sassyjumper July 11 2013, 01:54:00 UTC
They do like to gab :) Thanks for reading!

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barefootpuddles July 11 2013, 03:52:26 UTC
I read this today while exercising on a stationary bike at the gym and people kept looking over at me because so much of this had me laughing out loud. :)

A few of my favorite lines:

we just have to do what the police won’t. We’ll stake out the place and be there when the peeper arrives.”

This conversation was getting surreal.“And then what?” House challenged. “You’ll lecture him into submission?”

.....

It was as if he were looking at pre-thymoma Wilson-albeit a frailer, messier version in worn, grass-stained jeans and a holier-than-thou T-shirt that urged, “Plant More Trees.” Leave it to Wilson to buy a T-shirt that lectured.

.....

“To what will hopefully be a very fruitful working relationship,” Mark pronounced.

House nodded. “To fruit.”

(Mark better watch out. House already lost one love to a Mark, I don't think he would allow it happen again).

Great chapter. I can't wait for more of their adventures!

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sassyjumper July 12 2013, 01:56:49 UTC
You should've just told the gym people you were reading a House fanfic where House and Wilson move into a tiny house, and House is trying to become a P.I. They would totally have stopped looking at you weirdly.

Yeah, the name Mark just popped into my head, and it wasn't until after I'd written this that I remembered Stacy's Mark. Why not give House another Mark nemesis? :)

Thanks for reading!

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poli_73 July 14 2013, 11:49:35 UTC
I love this series :)

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sassyjumper July 14 2013, 21:50:05 UTC
I'm so glad -- Thank you!

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