Fic: Foreign Tongues

Sep 20, 2012 23:33

Title: Foreign Tongues
Characters: House/Wilson est
Rating: NC-17 (I guess)
Warnings: First time attempting smut. I apologize in advance.
Summary: House and Wilson have sex and speak in foreign languages. Kind of.

I don't care if you speak Swedish. )

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knitty_woman September 21 2012, 03:51:42 UTC
And why did you think this was stupid? It's charming. And so very manipulative!Wilson.

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sassyjumper September 21 2012, 16:13:11 UTC
And why did you think this was stupid?

I suppose it was the orgasmic Swedish :) Thanks for reading!

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rslhilson September 21 2012, 06:01:19 UTC
Can't believe this was only your first shot at smut - the whole thing was fantastic. Completely IC and completely hot. :) Not to mention it was quite amusing to imagine Wilson making orgasmic Swedish sounds, haha. Loved it to pieces <3

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sassyjumper September 21 2012, 16:14:49 UTC
Not to mention it was quite amusing to imagine Wilson making orgasmic Swedish sounds

I'm so glad someone else finds it amusing too :) Thank you!

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nyannyannayn September 21 2012, 06:04:27 UTC
“What’s up your ass? Besides not me.” - ALL the points for this line right here! Bravo!
Very in character very hot. Glad you decided to post it- it would be a shame to deprive us readers of this. Haha.

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sassyjumper September 21 2012, 16:16:03 UTC
“What’s up your ass? Besides not me.” - ALL the points for this line right here!

Hee. :) Thank you for reading/commenting!

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menolly_au September 21 2012, 06:50:08 UTC
Humorous, banter-filled smut with a side dish of angst relationship problems is the best kind :)

followed by post-sex surveys

I can see Wilson doing that :) Or maybe making a checklist of likes and dislikes...

As usual you have their dialogue spot on, glad you decided to post this!

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sassyjumper September 21 2012, 16:18:20 UTC
Or maybe making a checklist of likes and dislikes

I'm sure he does that after he compiles his survey data :) Thank you for reading!

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damigella_314 September 21 2012, 10:33:36 UTC
I can see you were unsure about posting it, since it is not so much pure smut :) as a great insight on how the two of them would face and solve relationship issues. Love the motivation for Wilson moving in, and what the fuck is a poaching cup? I'm with House on that :).
Extra points for Wilson not wanting to be naked on the couch, of course, but as usual you get them so well throughout it's hard for me to single out a specific line.

What I need now is a manip of Wilson biting his lower lip while his hair is sweated - and maybe a little snapshot of the wet curls on the neck.
I hope we'll see more of this!

Is it a stylistic choice to have House not say Björn with ö, or just a difficulty in coaxing your keyboard to produce accented letters?

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sassyjumper September 21 2012, 16:35:01 UTC
what the fuck is a poaching cup?

Ha! I don't know. It was on my friends' wedding registry back when I wrote this. I, too, said WTF?

Is it a stylistic choice to have House not say Björn with ö,

No, that was my choice to be lazy and not hunt for the umlaut. Sorry, I'll fix it!

Thank you for reading!

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