Fic: Dance With Me -- Part 2

[satanassa]

Title: Dance With Me
Characters: Ianto, Jack, Torchwood Team, Real!Jack
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: All characters here belong to the BBC. I am not making any profit from this.
Summary: Set during Series 1. This is a fic inspired by the idea that it was Ianto and not Tosh who accompanied Jack to the abandoned building in Series 1 episode 12 'Captain Jack

Comments

[remuslives23]

GO TOSH!! Loved her line: "Speak to me like that again and I'll blow your Nuts off". And Ianto's last line was perfect. :)

I've always disliked that line 'There's no one' in the show. It's so disrespectful to Ianto - no matter what their relationship was at the time.

[michael_the_car]

That was amazing and it has left me torn....

A part of me says that's it, it's completed. But a larger , more demanding part wants to read the scene where Jack realises what Ianto meant by those last words...and puts it right.

[hab318princess]

Ianto's last line... so heartbreaking and so true

great story

[lone_star_woman]

I liked Tosh shooting Owen. I wanted that to happen during the first series because of the way he treated her.

And the last two paragraphs are absolutely brilliant.

[satanassa]

Owen was really nasty to Tosh in the first series and I hated the writers' decision to make Tosh fall in love with Owen and pine away for him. Tosh can do much, much better!