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Fall of Reason - Chapter 2/?

Sep 05, 2013 15:00

Author: satine_1984
Title: Fall of Reason
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: G - NC-17 (It depends on the chapter)
Word Count: ?

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rating: nc-17, pairing: luke/reid, !author|artist: satine_1984, fan fiction, atwt, genre: angst/romance

Comments 13

amyafa September 5 2013, 20:29:13 UTC

So that was hot.

It is a good thing no one came to the house.
Imagine Lily coming back with the kids.

I am curious how you want to tell the rest of the story

satine_1984 September 9 2013, 15:22:07 UTC

Thank you very much for your lovely comment. Oh dear, I don't really want to imagine Lily or the kids walking in on that scene. Yeah, our two boys were pretty lucky no one came back to the house. ;)

bkwermy323 September 28 2013, 17:39:22 UTC

haha, I was thinking the exact same thing when I was reading this!

sleeper6 September 6 2013, 01:24:58 UTC

Wow, that was some very, very descriptive sex! And I loved it! I can see how the sex would be like this, hard and intense and aggressive. They didn't want to give in but they just had to with all the sexual tension between them.

Very well done! So curious about what will happen next.

satine_1984 September 9 2013, 15:31:40 UTC

Exactly! None of them was thinking rationally...or thinking about the consequences.
I'm so happy you liked it. I was a bit worried that the scene would be too long and the sex too descriptive. I had a hard time writing this chapter and there's still a lot of things I've to learn about writing smut...so I hope I'll improve with the next. ;)

hopperl September 6 2013, 18:50:38 UTC

Yay for smut! Can't believe that was your first foray! It was AMAZEBALLS! Can't even tell you. The Lilypad just was christened. Loved Luke's constant push/pull of emotions. So very hot! You can continue to foray away into the smut world. ;)

satine_1984 September 9 2013, 15:36:08 UTC

Awww, you have me grinning from ear to ear! Thank you so much for your sweet comment! :-*

bubbafrogz September 7 2013, 02:17:23 UTC

Kudos for the smut!! Very HOT! Combustible! Glad it was uninterrupted! Reid was so commanding! If I didn't know it was our Doctor Oliver I might have been worried. Teasing and needling Luke the whole time! I know Luke is going to catch hell for blacking out! Unless Reid did too?

satine_1984 September 9 2013, 15:47:36 UTC

You will find out very soon! :)
Thank you so much for reading and taking your time, commenting. Yeah, Reid is very commanding in this chapter. There is still a lot of anger inside him and also the fact that he doesn't have a lot of respect for Luke yet. It's still so early stages. They hardly know each other.

zzzfreckles May 2 2017, 19:17:00 UTC

Just checking in; I'm wondering when Chapter 8 will be ready for posting? I'm having major withdrawals and I really miss this story!!!!! Please post soon.

satine_1984 May 16 2017, 09:49:22 UTC

Dear freckles. I'm so sorry to put you off all the time. You cannot imagine how happy I am that you're still holding onto my story. With my self-employment and all it is really really stressful at the moment but I'm really trying to get some writing done soon. Thank you so much for being so patient with me. xx