[One shot] Definitely belonged to each other

[satorux3]

Title: Definitely belonged to each other
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: Pg-16 (?)
Genre: Romance, Drama
Disclaimer: Only that Shinji Guy is mine. Sad.
Warning: Mentions of sex/raping, violent
Summary: If someone forced you to something, and you know it is bad and you didn’t want it, but you can’t do anything about it, what then? Ueda had this problem

Comments

[kyoko_godaikun]

this is good. Yes there is a ton of angst in this story. But Ryo came and save Ueda.

The only problem I really saw was your usuage of tenses in the story. Nothing really major. It didn't stop it from being good. What is your first language.

[satorux3]

Thank you x3 glad you like it x3

-die of emberassment- sorry for that >_< Need to speak/write better >_<
First Language is germany :)
thank you for the hint

[satorux3]

Err... I Mean german... xD

good Night~

[lunatic_wing]

i'm glad about every came to save Tatchan ^^
and the last section is so funny.

[satorux3]

Glad you liks it x3

Thank you for reading and commenting

[yunizhamasaki]

like the beginning
really glad everyone in rescue team
really really glad that Ryo have faith to Ueda
the last part is funny
thanks for the fic

[satorux3]

Happy you like it (:

Yes Ryo trusts him :D

Your welcome x3
And thank you for reading and commentin <3

[natsuki_suzu]

this is nice! xD
there are some angst.. lol~
but it's sweet!
and the last part is funny!
as expected from the almighty baka KAT-TN ne~ haha~

[satorux3]

Now where you said it.... you're right.
Angst again.. xDD
Glad you like it <3
I loved that baka KATTN xD

THank you for reading and commenting <3<3

[natsuki_suzu]

haha~ see? ur destined to write angst~ hahaha!
hey u can try to write crack.. i think it'll be great~ ^^

who doesnt love them? the only sane people are ueda and kame i guess.. lol~

[satorux3]

haha yes you're right xD
Angst is okay if it ends happy xD
I am such a happy end addicted fiction writer xD

Crack yes, that would be nice xD

Thats right xD I love them all the more xD
(Totally wrong grammar? haha xD )

[museelo]

No angst but it's scary ne ? o_o'

That's weird, Tatsuya is abused but he acts like that's casual xD
Haha you were inspired by the pictioure I showed you right ? XDDD

Anyway thank you ^.^

ps : "Don't leave me" is the right sentence xD

[satorux3]

regrettably yes QQ xD

I didn't noticed that before but you're right, weird Tat-chan -blamed it on Tat-chan- xD
Yes, the picture said to me: I want to appear in you fic and I couldn't help it Q_Q xDDD

You're welcome <3

Thank you Ö_Ö -die of emberasstment again- Kyah I am sick for already four days now, and I wrote fictions to kill time. But you see my brain begins to overloaded xDD
Or maybe it is just my english xD

-go on to check the fiction again-

Thank you for reading and commenting <3<3
-hugs-

[museelo]

I'll blame on Tat-chan but you're mean xD
I knew you would write a story based on this picture xD

I hope you'll get better. Oh ! Write my dear, write 8DDDD xD

You're really welcome <3

[satorux3]

I love Tat-chan even if he's the biggest weirdo in the world xDD No no no he isn't :P xD
A little bit mean.. a little little bit fufufu xDD

I will definitely ;D I have to go to school tomorrow but I am already working on the next, it's supposed to be EXTRA EXTRA CUTE T_T xD

<3~