Fic: Dbsk Changmin/Yunho

Mar 30, 2010 01:23



He glances at you worriedly from the corner of his eye as everyone enters the apartment, Yoochun going straight to his bedroom while you stare listlessly in the hallway.  You feel his warm hand on your shoulder and you look up.

“Changmin-ah, what’s wrong?” He asks warm brown eyes filled with worry.

“It’s nothing. I’m just tired.” You try to ( Read more... )

changmin/yunho, yunho/changmin, dbsk, homin

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yuxo March 31 2010, 03:18:48 UTC
OMG!! ;___; this is the sweetest thing ever alsjkdf i've always wanted to read a fic that tackled yunho's past and the inevitable bitterness of those memories which eventually led him to become the AMAZING and generous person that he is now. no rain, no rainbow, right?

ugh i adored this so much. :') changmin made me :DDDD and want to pat him on the head for doing the absolute most wonderful thing. :) as long as you have someone who loves you, there's ALWAYS a place for you to belong.

:DDDD i hope to see more, yeah!? 8DDDD

♥ :3

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satoshiice March 31 2010, 03:26:21 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! To tell you the truth it's actually because of you that I got interested in homin, I read your fics and *bam* I couldn't get enough of homin XD

Yunho's past was something that always pulled at my heartstrings so I kinda wanted to address it...

I have another fic in progress right now...so you should defintely expect more from me =D

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yuxo March 31 2010, 03:28:40 UTC
ahahaha no prob, i enjoyed it a lot!! :) and heeeeee :D i'm very happy to hear that because imo, there is never enough homin love to go around. :D welcome to the team! :D we have cocktails and m&ms and wonderful things to keep you in the dark side 8DDDD

eeee i'm excited for more! :D don't leave us waiting for too long! :)

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apocryphalic March 31 2010, 03:32:35 UTC
oh wow, i read this earlier in the day when you posted and forgot to log back into my account to comment but i return : )

i have to say that i really liked the way you characterized both yunho and changmin. there's something so sweet and young still about the way changmin feels for yunho and i find that really touching and the way that he holds the older man, especially since he's a little taller and his shoulders are a bit broader make me smile like crazy.

and also, sobs, when i heard yunho's story for the first time, i was really sad too. the poor boy has been through so much. it makes me :'( when i think about it.

anyway, i really enjoyed the way you wrote homin esp since not many do the first pov well, but you managed fine! i hope you write more homin : )

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satoshiice March 31 2010, 05:08:23 UTC
Thank you so much!I was kind of nervous posting it up since its my first time writing homin and I was scared that I wouldn't do justice to their relationship.

But I'm glad you liked it and your comment put a smile on my face =D

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eri_luv March 31 2010, 05:28:49 UTC
Because he is Yunho and he knows you like the back of his hand.

Sometimes you don't need words to understand each other.

Beautiful♥

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satoshiice March 31 2010, 05:56:50 UTC
Thank you! =)

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su_milk_jun April 1 2010, 00:00:55 UTC
wow this was unexpectedly nice =D I love it and the way you described Yunho I love it Chagnmin have this desire to take care of Yunho even if Yunho was strong and well off by his own but still having someone there for you, to lean on and hold his hand ;_; beautiful &heart;

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satoshiice April 1 2010, 03:19:17 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment =)

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@5nally moon_nt3 April 19 2010, 04:55:58 UTC
Woa... This story is so sweet!

I can feel the love between the two of them! My English is not good enough for me to express my thought. >"< But... Woa~~~

Thanks so much for such a beautiful story! ^^

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Ah, I really like this ff, and I also a huge fan of couple MinYun. So... can I have your permission to translate it into Vietnamese?

I really want to share this ff with other fans of cp MinYun. ^^ Please!!!

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Ah, actually, I'm 5nally, because my livejournal acc can not be used.

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satoshiice April 19 2010, 06:41:51 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it =D

I have no problem with you translating it in Vietnamese, as long as you credit me =)

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moon_nt3 April 20 2010, 00:23:57 UTC
TT^TT

Finally... Thank you so much!

I'll give it full credit, and i'll send you the link after I post it.

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moon_nt3 April 23 2010, 14:29:20 UTC
^^ This is the link to my translation!

Thanks again for such a lovely story. ^^

http://www.hero-sexyjj.com/diendan/showthread.php?t=6171

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