Of One Wing Missing (Chapter 6)

Jun 05, 2011 10:34

Title       : Of One Wing Missing (Chapter 6)
Pairing : Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi/Ninomiya Kazunari)
Rating  : PG-13
Genre : Fluff, Romance
Beta    : My dear and lovely friend fey_37 
Summary : Ohno finally found the other half of his wings, but what if his other half already had two wings?
Note : I try to write R,,but totally failed XD,, so, minna,, don't ( Read more... )

romance, ohmiya, pg 13, fluff

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satoshilove June 4 2011, 15:45:28 UTC
you know,, I am bad with romantic scene XD

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satoshilove June 4 2011, 16:46:18 UTC
thanks for your awesome advise,,,hun
always make me relieved and wanna learn more <3

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himitsu_17 June 4 2011, 15:49:12 UTC
OOOh :< What is it with everybody writing so sad fanfics *sob*

Poor Oh-chan :<
Nino is quite tormented too but Oh-chan has really no chance :<
He loves Nino so much, Nino's near him, but he can touch and hold him near *sob*

Thank you for sharing! I wish it'll be better for them :3 ♥

Beautiful lay by the way *drool*

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satoshilove June 4 2011, 16:48:55 UTC
Oh, don't cry hun..
I promise to make them better, next XD

Thanks for reading ^^

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adeyakana June 4 2011, 15:49:44 UTC
it's sad
poor Ohchan,, Nino leave him like that >.<'
wait for next chapter

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satoshilove June 4 2011, 16:50:03 UTC
thanks for reading, hun ^^..,,

please looking forward for next ;)

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neenashareefa June 4 2011, 15:51:47 UTC
Seriously,,,One of my best weekend =))
1st,,,Fey's 2nd chapter,,,

AND 2nd...YOUR UPDATE...
I love this fic,,,
I love how you manage Nino's vulnerability :D

Fey,,,can I propose to her?

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neenashareefa June 4 2011, 16:22:21 UTC
well...yeah...
its too bad that my wifey is on leave
and she is too busy to be reach :(
poor me...

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satoshilove June 4 2011, 16:55:39 UTC
ahahahaha..

I'm really happy, became one of your best weekend ^^..,
Nino is looked good here *for me* XDD

thanks for reading,

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fancyann1974 June 4 2011, 17:05:40 UTC
was so happy they were trying to be there for each other after ohno finally confessed
aaahhh but nino left, what will happen next
cant wait to see
thank you so much for sharing

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satoshilove June 5 2011, 03:08:48 UTC

maybe, nino just confused =P.. hehe

thanks for reading ^^

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