Pieces: Chapter 4 (Finished)

[saurgristiel]

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Title: (?)
Author: saurgristiel
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: GacktxYou, Family
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Drama
Disclaimer: Blah blah, the usual.
Warnings: None
Words: 2,799
Summary: Recovery continues and memories can hurt.
Notes: Tissues for everyone! *tosses*. To hydeist-haido ^_^ (everybody else can read it

Comments

[hydeist_haido]

Update!

You don't know how happy I am to see GACKT AWAKE! It's so heart wrenching to see Chihiro ask her daddy to wake up ;A;

[saurgristiel]

I feel there should be something between You smiling at him and his fingers moving... Just to draw it out a little more... But I got nothin'. What about you?

Anything you might like to see? (these are 2 separate questions).

Thank you! *glomps*

(and already noticed a couple of tweaks I need to fix).

[hydeist_haido]

I can't really 'see' anything lacking lol. That's what I really lack when I write, I don't know where to put certain feelings in the story, but I want to see G and You having their lovey-dovey time <3

Btw, did you get my e-mail? :D

[saurgristiel]

Okay. And don't worry, they will. G just needs to feel better first XD

Yes, I did, and emailed you back saying I got it ^_~.