all the little peices falling

[savageblinddoll]

Here's a story of mine that I wrote.. it's kind of old, but yeah I wrote it and i'd apperciate some feedback, so thank you.

Tears of BloodThe sharp lustrous edge slid smoothly into her pale skin. She watched absent-mindedly as a steady dribble of cherry red blood crawled slowly down the side of her foot. As she pushed the blade in deeper, the

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[mozart420]

Wow...you really capture what it feels like to be a cutter and how great it feels to finally cut when you have been craving it for so long...I really like how you let us get into Amber's head and understand what she is feeling...I know that when I used to cut and my parents found out they never understood what was going on in my head...it was the most frustruating thing...Good job Megean (is that how you spell it?) I really enjoyed reading it...

Peace
Emily

[savageblinddoll]

Aww, thank you very much

[mozart420]

You are welcome very much :)

[savageblinddoll]

Aww, gracias.