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[savenorthmdtown]

As we drove down the street, still glistening and slippery from the late evening showers, we saw a man cross in front of our car wearing matching sport pants and jacket, clutching tight to a child’s backpack. He walked quickly with the backpack tucked under his chin, his nose pressed to the handle so he could smell the mixture of perfume and white

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[1960pixie]

aww
what is this from?

[savenorthmdtown]

I wrote it.

[1960pixie]

wow
seriously.
are you planning on becoming a professional writer?

[savenorthmdtown]

yup.

[anonymous]

As we drove down the street, still glistening and slippery from the late evening showers, we saw a man cross in front of our car wearing matching sport pants and jacket, clutching tight to a child’s backpack... There is no obvious shift from the person in the cars point of view to that of the story tellers, which leads an intelligent reader to believe that the person in the car somehow knows a ridiculous amount of information about this man

[savenorthmdtown]

thanks for the advice. who is this anyway?

[anonymous]

you'd never guess.

[savenorthmdtown]

that's right, and I wouldn't guess, because you could just as easily tell me.