I am VERY VERY proud of you Corey Snow. I hope you know that. This had the exact feel we were talking about at king tuts. Very narrative. I liked that it had a clear purpose. I usually can't think that coherently once I'm in. Thank you for posting this. :)
You have to start somewhere, babygirl. Have you read my first one? It's not really good either. I like the way you broke things up though and the underlying plot that made itself known despite the shortness. We both know that mine never even have a plot, just a string of weird motifs. I actually just wrote another one,. :)
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