Comments | savingsuperman: we need pills to sleep at night

savingsuperman

we need pills to sleep at night

Jan 31, 2011 22:59

also i know that my writing is inferior to 0459039040 of you guys who write so so beautifully my heart bleeds :/ but um here's something? tell me what i can do better ok :/ thank you guys (:

http://www.twitlonger.com/show/8gref7

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savingsuperman February 1 2011, 15:14:57 UTC

sobs weeping rn your comment is longer than my drabble ;a; puts you in pocket /forever/ ily <3 sobs this comment is longer than all the comments tlist gave me combined times 985945894 ;a; <3333

i'm touched that you took time to reread this cuz its really not that good :/ i was really iffy abt the beginning but i honestly wrote this with only the ending in mind? :( but omg i'll keep trying maybe one day i'll write /actual/ fic lmao but thank you so so much for the criticism i'm crazy happy right now and it is comparable to the feeling of jaejoong proposing to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

also the meaning really is open to interpretation so, yeah it can be ~whatever you want~

I LAB CHU ELICKAAAA