The Chronicles of the Hakai Senpuu, Chapter Two

[saxx]

Gentle zephyrs created small waves in the lake at the base of the western mountains, not very far at all from the village of Denkou Geritsu. Saxerei lay against a large, leafy tree a few yards from the lake, shade cast down over him protectively. The sun reflected brightly against the water, and the lake was silent. Sighing, Saxerei sat up. He

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Superb

[anonymous]

I did rather enjoy this entry, it was magnificent. I'm extremely eager for more, so keep writing. I'm sure Myrriak will be insane with his electrical powers. It's going to get good to say the least, right? Well, I suppose I'll end here. Keep it up, dear brother.

- Zakk, The Demon Beast of the Battlefield

Jeez, kids!

[saxx]

Frigg'n comment, losers! Especially you, almighty "Free Editor!"

[anonymous]

Excellent chapter. I look forward to the next one. I want to see what you make Xiro do. I know you'll make me proud, you always do. Keep it up. Until next time.

-The Demon-Beast of the Battlefield