I love it! Wideset eyes is one of my newest fads... I think it's from looking at vebelfetzer's art. That is one of the most delectible parts.
I think the hair could use more contrast in it, but it's drawn on really well, and I like the shadows on the ears; they look sculpted. Is that a robotic arm I see? Sweet XD I also love the shine/coloring on the eyes, and you did an excellent job drawing the nose and mouth. Very feline, and the shadows blend well. The lines along the jaw seem a bit too straight; usually I see more curve in them. But she looks very exotic, and I also know that's a style-thing in anime, so ignore it if you weren't intending it to have a realism-type of jawline.
I use hyphenated words too much. I think that means my vocabulary is lacking ;p Icky-poo. hehe
And, she's GORGEOUS. Just in case I forgot that part :) I want to smooch her!
i'm trying to work towards a realistic anime style, alot like what Risto does. after looking over the drawing some i'm beginning to realize that it's alot harder than i thought. like the eyes, even though wideset, aren't even. the right eye looks extremely small and way off where it actually should be. i guess i pick on myself more than i know... but with the jawline... i think i see what you mean by too straight. i was going for a mangy/messy look with the hair, so i didn't want a high shine on it, but do you think there should be more shadow?
how do you think the shading is going though? i don't know exactly what i'm looking for in the way of criticsm. i guess i want someone to pick it apart just as much as i do. :p i'm a dork.
i hope you don't mind me bothering you, but i need some help. i don't know how to use masking in adobe photoshop. *cries* i have a nice black outline and white background. how do i apply a mask so that just the black outline shows?
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I think the hair could use more contrast in it, but it's drawn on really well, and I like the shadows on the ears; they look sculpted. Is that a robotic arm I see? Sweet XD I also love the shine/coloring on the eyes, and you did an excellent job drawing the nose and mouth. Very feline, and the shadows blend well. The lines along the jaw seem a bit too straight; usually I see more curve in them. But she looks very exotic, and I also know that's a style-thing in anime, so ignore it if you weren't intending it to have a realism-type of jawline.
I use hyphenated words too much. I think that means my vocabulary is lacking ;p Icky-poo. hehe
And, she's GORGEOUS. Just in case I forgot that part :) I want to smooch her!
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i'm trying to work towards a realistic anime style, alot like what Risto does. after looking over the drawing some i'm beginning to realize that it's alot harder than i thought. like the eyes, even though wideset, aren't even. the right eye looks extremely small and way off where it actually should be. i guess i pick on myself more than i know... but with the jawline... i think i see what you mean by too straight. i was going for a mangy/messy look with the hair, so i didn't want a high shine on it, but do you think there should be more shadow?
how do you think the shading is going though? i don't know exactly what i'm looking for in the way of criticsm. i guess i want someone to pick it apart just as much as i do. :p i'm a dork.
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