Dark Charm Chapter 18

Jun 19, 2010 16:11



It's been a while but I just had my last day of high school ever two days ago. Ugh. If this feels strained, it's because I'm still feeling that. This one has a lot more of the other characters but I had to, you'll see if you read. So sorry for less Kyuwook. Sorry for like the change in mood half way through. It might be wierd. So unimpressed as ( Read more... )

ryeowook, kyuwook, kyuhyun, fanfic

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coregurlz June 19 2010, 20:39:41 UTC
Spot for me !!!

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coregurlz June 19 2010, 21:11:19 UTC
Lovely...I like this part..
“It felt unneeded so it commited suicide.” The drink was pushed to him.
Hahahahaha,it make me laugh...Sad for Henry but there was a person can be with him right?
Anyway thanks for the sweet and cute moment of Kyuwook,I always like what unnie make...hehehe

I feel Kyuwook is less now and I think unnie need to end it with a wonderful ending..Make a new story then,hehehe...Don't trouble too much..Good luck for unnie new life in September,I'm happy too...Saranghae unnie..
Update soon or make another Kyuwook fic...Hwaiting ^-^

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saya19 June 20 2010, 13:32:12 UTC
LOl. Yeah, the straw was no match for Kyuhyun.

Yeah. I know. I'm sorry dear. It's because I introduced many others that like I have to split the attention a bit more to resolve all of them. I'll try to make my other works more Kyuwook related. Haha.

Thank you so much! I hope to enjoy it too!!!!
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hennu15 June 19 2010, 21:31:25 UTC
WHY DIDN'T U TELLE ME???

Spot btw xD

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hennu15 June 19 2010, 21:55:15 UTC
so the last Kyuwook part almost blew away everything else, but ALMOST.

EunHae, what's with them and smut? xD but I feel so sad for EunHyuk, and who the heck was the intruder??? I WANNA KNOW, you just ended at the best part, but you tried to distract it with Kyuwook didn'y you-.-

Henry was awesome, I kinda forgot about kyu for a sec there and rooted for Henwook, but it's impossible in here:(

But the jealous Wook was so impossibly cute :3 me likey, that totally made up for the slight loss of Kyuwook, thou I really don't mind, it's interesting how everything was progressed and now I'm so into EunHae and HenBum that I just wanna know more about them:D

And ofc no need to mention your absolutely awesome writng skills:DDD You're in college, I'm in high school. Nice.

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saya19 June 20 2010, 13:35:38 UTC
LOL. :p Haha, didn't tell you...
I took a nap. Was so dead!!!!

LOL. Ummmm the smut part is left for the reader's to imagine whether there was any or not for now. I will reveal that later. Haha, intruder...well, if you read close enough, you could've figured it out by now. Haha, well, it wasn't to distract but more like fill the fic up with more Kyuwook.

I know. It's so sad. I fell in love with Henry while writing him but he had to lose and like gahhhhhhhh... T.T

Haha. I like jealous Ryeowook too. Lol. I want to make more of Eunhae and Henbum since I've done almost all that I can for Kyuwook. But gahhhhhh...still need Kyuwook :D

Thank you <333333. Haha. Enjoy HS?

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hennu15 June 20 2010, 16:12:44 UTC
I have my guess about who's the intruder, but I'll never tell my guesses out loud xD because I'm afraid that I'm wrong always:D

lol, I was only kidding:) but me likey, I think there was enough of Kyuwook:) or I just don't mind Henry, hmmm well you made me have a second Henry obsession...period? LOL

Sadly I'm not in HS yet, I'm in 8-th grade, which is unfair, I don't get why some younger than me are in 9-th grade=.=

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zelarkian June 20 2010, 02:31:24 UTC
haha the scene with the coke was so funny! (poor straw "commited suicide")
OMO KIBUM!!! what's gonna happen????????? I'm itching for more. thank you for another awesome-filled chapie. It made my day. Seriously.
Anyway keep up the AMAZING work and stuffs... :)

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saya19 June 20 2010, 13:37:39 UTC
Omo! Thank you. Hi. I don't think I've seen you before *waves* (or maybe a long time ago) Thank you for reading something of mine!!!!!
Haha. Yeah...will be explained soon but I always end up saying that...gahhhhhh...
THANK YOU FOR READING! That begins my day!!!!

Will try, can't guarantee the AMAZING though :DDDDD

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kyu_wook_min June 20 2010, 04:01:10 UTC
hi saya ^^ “Where’d my straw go?” “It felt unneeded so it commited suicide.” this lines make my day ^^ update soon ~ hwaiting !!!!

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saya19 June 20 2010, 13:39:05 UTC
Oh hi. Haha. Do I call you Kyu wook min then? >.<
Yes, the straw was no match for the likes of Kyuhyun.
Haha. yeah. I don't know if it'll be DC
Because I kind of want to write some smut LOL.
Wow, so pervy I am.

Anyways, thank you!!!

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kyu_wook_min June 20 2010, 15:17:55 UTC
hehe by calling me kyu_wook_min its really really veri odd >.< so can we be friends ? i'm a boy 15 this year and i'm from singapore. can u pls tell me ur age,gender and where u'r from too ? hwaiting !!!! saranghae ~

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saya19 June 20 2010, 15:21:59 UTC
Yeah. It is a bit odd. Sure why not? :DDDD
I'm a girl, noona, then I guess.
I'm 17, turning 18 later this year.
And I live in the land where Henry grew up :DDDD
Canada <3.
So that means you're really far.

Haha. You're cute.
Thank you for the hwaiting!!!!!
Saranghae <3

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xrosepetalsx June 20 2010, 04:23:55 UTC
AWWWING over the Kyuwook part <3 That was too cute. I love Jealous!Wook, even if Jealous!Kyu is even more amazing xDDD And then Ryeowook mistaking the person Kyuhyun was looking at was hilarious as well lol, poor thing <3

DD; So confused! I don't understand why, if Donghae loves Hyukjae, why he won't just be with him! I DON'T GET IT D< And and and the Eunhae parts and the Kiry parts were like algjaskld

I want to see how it turns out for both pairings DDD: And I want to know what happened between Kibum and Donghae - at least I'm assuming it was between Kibum and Donghae xDD

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saya19 June 20 2010, 13:42:46 UTC
Awwwwwwwwww...Now I'm awwwwwwing too. Haha. Did your face melt? LOL. Mine might after this comment. Haha, both jealous is amazing though. I like either way!!! Haha. Yes Poor bb.

LOL. I got you confused again. Oh noes! Ummm...next chapter? It should make sense when i come out with it all which should be sooonnn! Only a few more chapters left! GAH! I want supernatural to start!!!! Haha, yeah I liked the Kimochi parts too much now! I spend too much time thinking about that!

Yes. Assumption correct. Mhmmmmm..We'll seee.....
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I missed you last night DDDDDD:

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xrosepetalsx June 20 2010, 20:51:33 UTC
Sorry, D: I've been helping my friend move! Talk to you soon though, K? <333

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saya19 June 20 2010, 20:54:14 UTC
Okay <333333

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