The Fourth Mistake Part 1

Sep 25, 2010 14:12



Title: I'll Give You One Half Of Me But The Other Is For You To Find...And It's Been With You All This Time/The Fourth Mistake (since the first title is too long)
Part: One
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Ryeowook (main), three others later
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ryeowook's made three mistakes in his life and his fourth one might be the best or worse mistake of his ( Read more... )

kyuhyun/ryeowook

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hennu15 September 25 2010, 18:57:54 UTC
Ohmygosh I missed you so much <333 and your writings, you're just as awesome as you were before, like omg you write so awesomely good xD I missed your awesome stories xD lol <3

Anyways omg I love this, freaking LOVE THIS!!!!! Really I dont wanna say awesome anymore but this was freaking awesome xD...perfect... yup new word, it was perfect xD

It's soo you, to write like that I dunno, yeah I'm not gonna explain that cuz you wouldnt understand...I lovelovelovelovelove this, you gotta update soon. My grandma called twice while I was reading-.- Now because of you I have this really darkdarkdark image of Kyuhyun in my mind ~~ belt buckling~~ lol

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saya19 September 26 2010, 20:11:12 UTC
thank you bb
for always reading and supporting.
I needed it.
:D

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saya19 September 26 2010, 20:12:46 UTC
Lol.
Thank you for missing me and my stories..
been through rough patches and still am so its a bit more diffiuclt for me to write and thats why my stuff might be more angsty and confused but nevertheless..:D

haha. thank you. ill try to keep writing.
haha. ok i do trust you :D

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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leunah23 September 25 2010, 20:45:19 UTC
SPOT!!!! I miss u aimee!!! where have u been?? brb for a proper comment *goes to read*

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leunah23 September 25 2010, 21:00:52 UTC
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! so its the awkward phase after having sex with your friend....oh my gosh...kyu likes wookie ne? gaaaaaaaaaaaaah this situation is kinda complicated and this story is very interesting... ^^
i like the way you described the brushing of teeth and all the bitterness that came with it...it was very good ^^
hey aimee i hope you'll update soon ^^ Miss you!!!!!!!!! *hugs*

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saya19 September 26 2010, 20:14:44 UTC
lol yes it is the awkward phase..
haha thank you..

i have been in my first two/three weeks of university.
and going through some bad phases.
this story really is going to reflect some things about myself but whatever. i think thats the only way i can really motivate myself to write right now...

thank you for missing me.
i missed you too.
:D

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coregurlz September 26 2010, 02:14:39 UTC
spot~

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saya19 September 26 2010, 20:15:13 UTC
lol of course.
hope to hear from you later
:D

its the lovely core <3

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coregurlz September 28 2010, 17:05:04 UTC
Unnie...I really miss unnie a lot and sorry for the late comment..I'm busy lately but now,I will comment your awesome fic as usual!!This was interesting althought some part make me complicate a bit..so,what the mistake that Ryowook did?and they just doing it because of what?They want to comforting each other but they don't know what each other feeling meant.they thought that it was only friend...did a sex with friend?It was totally different and hurting...especially in mentally..I didn't know why am I talking like this,It hard to describe their weird feeling but I hope in the next part will make me understand the fic more!It was along time to not read this kind of fic.It totally make me happy and statisfied.A fic about two bestfriend do sex,so that they we're statisified after they had a worse life and end up with loving each other but I don't know if the fic was happy or sad ending..Ryeowook had a lover before this happen?and it was really make Kyuhyun don't like the way he being like that..so harsh and hot tempered Kyuhyun in the ( ... )

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kyu_wook_min September 26 2010, 03:02:27 UTC
noona u'r finally back !!! i miss u ~ and the inmate fic >.< are u stoping that and dark charm ?

oh is that a one night stand only ? who's wookie ex ? gosh i hope things will get better ... hwaiting !!! saranghae noona ~ update soon kays ?

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saya19 September 26 2010, 20:16:50 UTC
lol hello my dongsaeng..

ummm...ihope no but i havent gotten really in the mood to write it, i have like a bit written for the next chapter of inmates..
going through a touch writing patch..
ill try to at least finish this one.
i dont think ill be writing long part stories anymore.
i hate not being able to finish it.

and as for th question about this story..youll find out soon. part2 :p

thank you.saranghaeyeo to you too <3

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