[Hetalia] A State of Confusion [1/1]

[sayasama]

Title: A State of Confusion
Author/Artist: Sayasama
Character(s) or Pairing(s): UK, Fem!US, Not fem!US, somewhat shippy, but that's not the point.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Swearing, gender confusion, un-beta'd, alternating between nation names and human names
Summary: England does not cope well with surprises.  Especially not when the surprise is that

Comments

[quim_sketches]

I swear your fic made me laugh at the same flustered;

I know how England feels, it must be driving his blood levels high and its all because of an imaginary line XD

Gosh, to think I knew Hetalia couldn't get any radom-er lol

[sayasama]

Poor England, even when America's not trying to, he messes with his head.

There are no bounds to Hetalia's randomness! Or so I imagine.

Thank you ♥

[ahmerst]

WHAT IF AMERICA STOOD WITH ONE FOOT OVER EACH SIDE OF THE LINE (ﾟ⊿ﾟ)

Okay, but is in all seriousness, very interesting concept and an even better presentation of it. As always, what you write it wonderfully refreshing, serious and humorous at the same time, and altogether lovely.

[sayasama]

Aaaaaah I never even thought of that... He'd be a hermaphrodite until he crosses. Yup.

Thank you, as always~! It was fun thinking of all the different ways to mess with Arthur's head via genderswap. Poor chap. xD

[technoranma]

Brilliant. The gender changing was really flawlessly written, and I really REALLY like the concept of their estrangement giving that extra touch of America being almost completely a different person from the one England knew. Great fic, very thoughful, and I very much enjoyed it!

[fmptard]

As well-written as that was, i'm a bit uneasy with the concept (being a Floridian and all). nobody likes to think of the partitioning of their home state as a geographical sex-change operation, i hope you'll understand...

ha ha! America must've been a huge Andrew Jackson fan! with all that grudge he was bearing it seems sorta fitting that he'd cause a couple of international incidents in his quest to annex America's Wang.

[nastybillabong]

Well done, well done! /claps
I like how you made use of the civil war in the story. It really marks the whole fem/male America thing happening. c:

Great job, even if the ending was a tad rushed. x'3