Rat Trap [3/6]

[sayasama]

Title: Rat Trap [3/6]
Author/Artist: Sayasama
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Russia/US, and an "It's complicated" UK->US.  Minor pairings include: LietPol, Netherlands/Canada, and GerIta.  France and Prussia also make some appearances later. 
Rating: PG-13 (maybe M) for sexual themes, some swearing, and later allusions to violence.
Warnings:

Comments

[rissa_ichigo]

GOSH DARNNIT ARTHUR I AM GOING TO STRANGLE YOU! GRRRRR! YOU SON OF A ASSHOLE! GRAGH! HETTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!

*breathes deeply and tries to calm down*

Okies.....gah! Why! Well, I know why, you jealous bastard!

I love you so much, you know that? XD This chapter was sooooo good, and my god, you even made me start to like Iggy for a bit o_o WTF? And then he totally lost that little bit at the end. -_-;

[sayasama]

Let's just hold off the strangling for three more chapters? I still need him. xD

Jealous doesn't even start to cover it.

Thank you~! >//< Artie's a bit human, here and there. It's always good to remember that even thge douchiest of douchbags still suffers hangovers.

[not_elven]

*hugs Alfred* poor baby.
Ivan needs a hug too. Whether he wants it or not. *hugs*

I came in from a party and I was set on going to bed but my computer was still on and what to my wondering eyes should appear? An update! This is a fantastic and really well written story. I can't wait for the next update.

[sayasama]

They all very much need hugs.

Thank you! Hopefully the wait won't be too long.

[sayasama]

Poor Ivan indeed, having to see that. D:

[akayagi]

Oh no! Poor Alfred and poor Ivan. :( I can't wait to see what happens next!

[sayasama]

They've just got it rough, poor boys. Next update will be soon, so you won't have to wait long. :3

[sageofwind_21]

... I'm twitching right now. Seriously. If Arthur was a real person... well, let's just say he wouldn't be a whole person anymore. And Ivan and Alfred; God, I would love to just pull them in a tight hug and kiss their pains all away... and then send them off to some island to enjoy the rest of their days together. Yeah.

But, you know what? That means that this fic is awesome and deserves so much praise! To be able to evoke these kind of emotions means you're a wonderful writer! I don't know how I'm going to last until the next update! I can't wait! ♥

[sayasama]

If only they could, huh? Well, it'll all hopefully be resolved to your liking, even without the island get-away. xD

Thank you~! I'm happy that my writing can get an emotional reaction (even though it's a sort of violent one xD). Next update to come soon~!

[sageofwind_21]

I'll be glad for the resolution, even if Alfred and Ivan don't end up together. I reallly love your characterization of Ivan; even though he's hurt and angry, when Alfred comes to find him, he'll understand and try to do something about Alfred's situation.

Eh, I feel a bit bad now commenting about it (because I don't think I've ever told a writer I wanna maul England before), but I have this 'argh' feeling with England most of the time in fandom. He's definitely in character here (well, at least to me), but there are very few stories where I like him. But, enough about my feelings; I eagerly await the next segment!

[sayasama]

Yeah, he's not so unfeeling as to not at least listen to Alfred's story.

Ah, it's fine, because as far as this story goes he does kinda deserve a beating. Fandom can play pretty fast and loose with his character, so I'm glad he at least seems in character to you here! Next chapter should be up on Thursday~!