Rat Trap [5/6]

May 15, 2010 12:54

Title: Rat Trap [5/6]
Author/Artist: Sayasama
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Russia/US, and an "It's complicated" UK->US.  Minor pairings include: LietPol (platonic), Netherlands/Canada, and GerIta.  France and Prussia also make some appearances later. 
Rating: PG-13 (maybe M) for sexual themes, some swearing, and later allusions ( Read more... )

russia, america, usuk, us, uk, russia/america, hetalia, rat trap

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sageofwind_21 May 15 2010, 18:27:42 UTC
Remember the whole 'Ivan should exist' thing? Um, yeah, I think I'm just going to build this Ivan. He's just perfect. I mean, how many guys would care like he does?

Poor Alfred's just keeps breaking my heart; not even able to stay in the moment when it's all consensual. Though, Francis, you're just a wonderful man, too, and I hope you're not too good to be true.

Wow, next one is the last, huh? Well, it's sad that it's the last, but I want to know how it ends!

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sayasama May 15 2010, 23:30:55 UTC
Can we mass produce them? Every girl (and Alfred) should have an Ivan.
I see even Ivan's canon-character as being pretty caring though. Like, he cares for his people so much and sort of over-helps (and goes crazy). He's just a sweetie to me though...

Poor Alfred indeed. He's gonna have a time of getting over this whole business. Franny's a good guy, he's just concerned.

Yup, it all comes to an end on Monday, because everyone needs a pick-me-up on Monday.

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sageofwind_21 May 15 2010, 23:37:58 UTC
I'll do that. However, we'll have quality over quantity, because there's no way I'm allowing one to defect. That just causes problems.

I do, too. He has his moments, but in a relationship or dealing with his people, he wants to do everything he can for them. He really does care, and he really does love them. I don't really like the rapetruck!Ivan that some people believe is canon. I mean, I like Ivan being forceful at times, since he's had to be in certain situations outside of sexual ones, but, for a sexual situation, I see it only happening if it's like a consensual thing. Does that make any sense?

I like Francis as a caring figure; Alfred needs all the help he can get.

Oh, wonderful! I think I have to work Monday. XD

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sayasama May 16 2010, 01:55:09 UTC
Yes! I'm totally pre-ordering one.

Yeah, that's how I see it. Being a badass mo-fo when he has to be is one thing, but I don't see his "childishly cruel" character description as covering rape or sexual violence. Rather, such affection (which he seems to crave and desperately need) seems like something he would treasure too much to jeopardize.

I do too. He knows when to put his libido away and just be supportive.

xD Then hopefully this will make a nice after-work-pick-me-up!

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rissa_ichigo May 15 2010, 19:38:03 UTC
omgosh! This chapter! This has deff. lifted my spirits today, for I have had such a sad day. >_<

I laughed so much at Gilbert's resume! XDD "How awesome do you feel today?" PFFFFFT! XDD I adore Gilbert so much! <3

Arthur will not take this well when he truly finds out, and I really pray for him...>_>; I hope he doesn't do something stupid! *worries*

I love you so much, and always look forward to reading this! Thankies!

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sayasama May 15 2010, 23:33:28 UTC
D: I'm glad this made your sad day a bit better!

Gilbert's just... too awesome. So naturally, he'd have the coolest resumes.

Arthur... well, we shall see, hm?

You're welcome~! Next chapter on Monday!

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disko_fire May 15 2010, 21:45:37 UTC
; ~ ; that was lovely.<3 Hehe GIlbert would own a pet store or a chick farm :D.

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sayasama May 15 2010, 23:34:17 UTC
Gilbert will take over the world with his legions of well-trained chicks and dogs!
Thanks~

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kang_jae_gyu May 15 2010, 22:40:10 UTC
The next chapter is the last... I'm SO worried that something bad's gonna happen to make this end tragically, like Arthur goes apeshit and all hell breaks loose. D:

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sayasama May 15 2010, 23:35:57 UTC
Well, we'll see how that goes...

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sakerat May 15 2010, 22:54:02 UTC
I just can't tell you how much I needed a fic like this. Hope is one of the greatest treasures out there...right up there with love.

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sayasama May 15 2010, 23:36:18 UTC
;_; Totally. Thank goodness these guys have hope.

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