Rat Trap [6/6]

May 17, 2010 17:13

Title: Rat Trap [6/6]
Author/Artist: Sayasama
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Russia/US, and an "It's complicated" UK->US.  Minor pairings include: LietPol (platonic), Netherlands/Canada, and GerIta.  France and Prussia also make some appearances later. 
Rating: PG-13 (maybe M) for sexual themes, some swearing, and later allusions to violence.
Warnings: ( Read more... )

russia, america, usuk, us, russia/america, rat trap, uk

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rissa_ichigo May 17 2010, 23:37:49 UTC
D'awwwwwwwwwww! <3 The ending was just too cute! That's so sweet of Mattie and Ivan to pay for Alfred to go to school!

This story was one of the best, and I was eagerly awaiting this chapter update! Thanks so much for the story, and I hope you write another awesome story sometime soon! X3

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:44:55 UTC
It seemed like a nice, hopeful note to end on.

Thank you~! I'll definitely be writing more of these two sometime. They're just so fun. <3

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mymasterisemo May 18 2010, 05:49:28 UTC
This was...lovely. ;u;
...How bad am I for feeling a tiny bit sorry for Arthur? OTL
*throws him to Francis*

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:43:48 UTC
Thank you~!
Well, as much of a bad guy as he is in this, he's still got his own feelings. So you can't be that bad at all. xD

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:42:45 UTC
Yes, it was fun while it lasted...
Thank you~ I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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akayagi May 19 2010, 05:42:50 UTC
Awww! What a happy ending! And a pilot! I approve. Enormously. :)

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ai_08 July 28 2010, 22:12:23 UTC
oh my god.

i am really a sobbing mess now.

seriously, everything about this- god, i cried when gilbird stepped onto his finger. it was like, it's ok alfred, you're not tainted. everything will be ok now. i just... gah. this story. and ivan. just- i love seeing him written this way. and that last line. oh alfred, you really are going to be ok one day.

best happy ending. ever.

i need to go finish crying now.

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sayasama July 29 2010, 00:51:17 UTC
Thank you so much!

Somehow while writing that scene, I didn't realize just how much it could mean, that something innocent like a bird would recognize his goodness. You have managed to make me aware of a new depth in my own story; for that you are incredibly awesome.

Thank you again and I hope the crying doesn't give you a headache. (Sorry! orz)

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ai_08 July 29 2010, 15:07:36 UTC
seriously, as soon as i read that, the water works started. i just pictured this tiny, trusting foot reaching out for alfred's finger and i just- god, that's why i loved this so much. intensional or not, it just- dbjkwdnkjnde you just made everything all better in the end ;_; *hugs fics and never lets go*

why do i fail at getting my points across ahahaha XD

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