[Fanfic] A Torment to Themselves [1/2]

[sayasama]

 Title: A Torment to Themselves [1/2]
Character(s) or Pairing(s): USxUK, past USJapan that's still fairly relevant
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Historically unpleasant subjects. Kinda choppy writing.
Summary: England wonders if he'll ever be alone in his relationship with America. 
A/N: I started this like, a half a year ago when kochiroo asked around the USxUK

Comments

[shibbyone]

Holy crap, I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. As someone who likes seeing America and Japan together (but I don't ship them... anyway) I love how jealous England is. I feel like it's really a part of his character to be jealous of people's affections for others, especially since he really doesn't have any friends of his own around the world. Ack. Looooooooooove thissssss. I also really like the little touches of America trying so hard to understand Japan's culture, and the scene after the bombs was just heartbreaking. <3

[sayasama]

I like America and Japan as bros too. They're such an unexpected friendship.
England and jealous do seem to be synonymous. It's such an endearing trait in him <3
I'm glad you like it so far, and hopefully the next part won't disappoint~!

[kasumicc]

I'm really liking how you're telling America and Japan's relationship from England's POV. I don't blame him for being jealous, lol. Though I wonder if America has any conflicting feelings. I want to read more!

[sayasama]

It's really fun to write them from England's POV, his head is such an interesting place. xD
The next part will hopefully be out soon~