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Butterfly Knots - [Oneshot]

Jul 03, 2010 02:48

Title: Butterfly Knots
Length: Oneshot
Author: sayhell
Rating: G
Pairings: Chibi! Yunjae
Genre: Fluff
Summary: Stubborn Jaejoong has trouble with his shoelaces, and Yunho helps.
( Clad in a fluffy white jacket and fleece pants, Jaejoong resembled an oversized cotton ball that blended immaculately into the snow. The ear muffs he wore were equally white, a contrast to the raven locks splayed across his forehead. )

type: oneshot, pairing: yunho / jaejoong

Comments 33

zoevo July 3 2010, 06:18:24 UTC

I love the mental image of chibi Jaejoong sitting like a cotton ball with tears in his eyes trying to tie his shoelaces, as well as the image of him propping his feet and Yunho bending down to help him. Those scenes looked even more beautiful with the snowy background.
Totally love it.
Thanks for sharing.

meanie_minnie July 3 2010, 06:34:23 UTC

i totally love this! Jaejoong is stubborn, and he doesn't want to admit Yunho's kindness. instead he gives a candy as a thankyou :D
Jae is as sweet as his candy :)
thanks for writing this~

harangkaori July 3 2010, 08:02:41 UTC

SPOT

aww this is so cute
thanks for writing this dongseng ^^

im glad you are back and yes this is certainly a change from "breaking the fall"

get some rest *hug*

sera_phina July 3 2010, 08:34:02 UTC

aww ... shy jaejoong treating yunho as his arch nemesis is so cute! and his way of thank you is LOVE! hopefully he will learn to accept yunho and they would become the best of friends and lovers when they grow up.

hehe ... chibi yunjae are so cute! thanks for sharing =)

kpopangel July 3 2010, 10:31:28 UTC

Aww i can really imagine cute chibi!jae wearing the white ear muffs <33 ahh feisty little joongie x3 lucky him to have someone as good and lovely as little yunnie!

The gears in Yunho’s head turned and he tried another strategy. “If you don’t let me help, all of us will be late. You know Mrs Lee is a monster when it comes to punctuality.” Yunho raised his hands into claws and rolled his eyes back into their sockets. Jaejoong reeled back, frozen.

You know, i love this chibi!Yunjae story (alhough, chibi yunjae fics are always cute and lovable <3).. i'm glad to see you write fluff instead of angst, which you normally did :) and i see you did it just as well <33