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a first for everything

Aug 10, 2008 00:41

Title: A First For Everything
Rating: M
Pairing: Marian/Robin, AU
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters or the rights. No profit is being made off of this.
Authors Note: This has been cross posted to two other RH comms. Ideas from this and this picture.

No, he'd never meant to hurt her, not this way, not for so long. But she wouldn't hear of an ( Read more... )

rating: m, author: openmoments, title: a first for everything, entry, ficathon: picture prompts #1

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openmoments August 10 2008, 08:25:32 UTC

Thanks^^ I was trying really hard to get it like that, glad I succeeded.

hoodie622 August 10 2008, 22:59:21 UTC

I really like how you've managed to write something that ends so sweetly in such an angst-filled way. :)

openmoments August 11 2008, 01:08:18 UTC

Thank you so much! It was one of the easiest pieces for me to write, which made me a little nervous, but it seems that I did an okay job. Thank you!

primaryc August 30 2008, 02:51:12 UTC

Ah, the angst! It's so true though, that Robin's yearning for domestic life was what Marian always resisted on some base level. Maybe she didn't want to be defined by that. I love that you wrote that Robin had to withdraw to make her realize that they really wanted the same thing all along. Lovely :)

thedreamygirl September 9 2008, 06:44:56 UTC

Oh this is lovely. You did a wonderful job of exploring Robin's feelings and it's really well written.