They really needed a scene like this. Where the issue of Robin's departure was properly addressed. You explored their characters really well, Robin's jealousy and Marian's need for affection.
I love this!! Why-oh-why couldn't Marian have stayed in the forest, stealing both Robin's bed and his heart?
Their bickering, each so stubborn tryiing to hold their ground, but finally revealing the hurt caused by the other's actions is very well done. As swirliness said, they really needed a scene like this. WE needed a scene like this:(
I love this! I would have loved to have seen these two moments! The first was so sweet with him giving her his bed and her wanting him not to go too far - and oh the second! They really needed a conversation like that, discussing him leaving and Gisbourne and everything. It was all so sweet.
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Very well written, please write more!!
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I still haven't decided if I can write more, it's so hard now that I know it's not going anywhere ;___;
But I'll give it a go :)
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Why-oh-why couldn't Marian have stayed in the forest, stealing both Robin's bed and his heart?
Their bickering, each so stubborn tryiing to hold their ground, but finally revealing the hurt caused by the other's actions is very well done. As swirliness said, they really needed a scene like this. WE needed a scene like this:(
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I do completely believe that it did not take very long for Marian and Robin to start sharing that bed.
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No. It certainly wouldn't take me long. Em, I mean Marian. Yes, Marian.
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Also, that now I feel cheated as the show didn't give us this much when we Robin & Marian so deserved it. *scowls* *loves you*
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I feel cheated as the show didn't give us this much when we Robin & Marian so deserved it. *scowls* and that's why FanFic was invented.true story.lol
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Thanks for taking part in the ficathon! :)
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