Comments | saywheeeee: fic: rewriting

saywheeeee

fic: rewriting

Apr 03, 2011 22:43

title: rewriting
author: saywheeeee
characters: eleven, amy, river, rory
pairings: slight eleven/amy, amy/rory, and river/eleven
genre: angst/drama/romance
rating: teen for swearing
word count: 4473
summary: Time can be rewritten, but the cost is high.

( He is watching himself losing someone, and both his hearts pound furiously, his hands tightening on the cold window sill. )

series:canon_compliant, fan:fic

Comments 14

heintz57 April 4 2011, 03:14:51 UTC

Beautiful and a bit sad at the same time him leaving Amy and Rory behind was heartbreaking then you threw all that timey-whimy stuff and I was delighted at the ending. Well done

saywheeeee April 5 2011, 20:10:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.

nicodemusfleur April 4 2011, 03:17:17 UTC

Gahh AMAZING as usual. Really, really beautiful.

saywheeeee April 5 2011, 20:10:48 UTC

Thank you. :)

tasty_kate April 4 2011, 03:28:17 UTC

You did it again. Amazing. You're almost becoming more Moffat-like, playing with time like that. Loved it all. Loved every bit of it.

On a personal note: Thank you. I got the cry out I needed to get out. Now can we have something that is both beautiful AND fluffy? :)

saywheeeee April 5 2011, 20:12:20 UTC

Did...did you just compare me to...I...the...um...*goes catatonic*

You really can't go giving me compliments like that, it can't be good for my health. But thank you anyway!

Now can we have something that is both beautiful AND fluffy?

Working on it!

tasty_kate April 5 2011, 21:43:43 UTC

I only have this to say: I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND I LOVE THE MOFF'S WRITING, THEREFORE...

Woohoo!! I'll keep my eyes pealed!

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saywheeeee April 5 2011, 20:12:58 UTC

I AGREE WHY IS IT NOT APRIL 23RD YET

ALSO THANKS FOR THE REVIEW

define_serenity April 4 2011, 10:10:25 UTC

oh this was absolutely fabulous! i LOVE your writing, it was sad, and hopeful at the same time, and the timey wimey was perfect :)

saywheeeee April 5 2011, 20:13:09 UTC

Why thank you, I'm glad you thought so!