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May 26, 2004 03:18

I am not sure what to title this and i am sure no one will comment no one ever does really...cept 2 or 3 certain people so here it is... my newest poem

Looking at you
Then to the knife
That is gently pressed
Against my beating neck

Cold, deep, and blue
Are the eyes that stare at you
Feeling the coldness of the blade
Cutting gently into my neck

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matt, its kel anonymous May 26 2004, 15:01:59 UTC
wowsa... matt. your a crazy kid... youve uhh... changed alot? hmm... your a weird one... but hey.. who am i to talk.. lol. morbid ol' me... ill ttyl?

Kel

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pinklovespell May 26 2004, 16:25:12 UTC
i love you, you know that, i would die for you, you should know that.

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dansparagonbaby May 26 2004, 22:05:00 UTC
I'm pretty damn sure i understand everything in that entry. /Kisses cheek. Matt, i'm always going to be here for you. You mean a lot to me even though we've known each other for such a short time... I'd gladly do anything in my power to help you. Be completely yourself with me, don't put a mask on. Just understand that i'll love you just as much if you were honest and showed me your "bitter" side as well, or just your "sweet" side. Either way you'll still have the same place in my heart.

And i don't think it's for pity either. Journals aren't for sympathy, they're just the same as a regular hand-written journal. Anyone can read them, you just select the few who are allowed to. /Kisses cheek.

Again, Matt, i'm here for you when you need me.

Katie.

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hmm.... anonymous May 28 2004, 05:00:06 UTC
Thats pretty good...I don't now wut to say really..and you'll never figure out who this is :-P

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Re: hmm.... sayyay4virgins May 30 2004, 19:32:56 UTC
it would be nice to kno... *begs* plz :(

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