Forbidden Fruit Chapter 3

[sayyida_jaida]

Forbidden Fruit-Chapter 3

For Sara.

This may be the end of this road. We shall see if the Muse decides to carry us on.... Perhaps one more....

Unbetaed, so I apologize for errors.

Hugs.

Oh... and remember I said it would get dark? DARK! Squick!

Be warned.

Comments

[adamolupin]

Daaaaaaamn girl! Wow. That's just.... The build up in the previous chapters, Bella's devotion even after all that... everything was spot on. I loved it, darkness, depravity and all.

Great story babe!! XD

[lorett]

EEPS -

Yeah - squicky was correct. It was dark and creepy, but totally something I can see a depraved, crazy Voldy doing.

Wonderfully descriptive, love. Bella is scary and crazy obsessed with Voldemort - you brought that out clearly and it was very well written.

YAY! Sara will lurrvee it, I'm sure.

MWAH

L

[slytherinswench]

Sara does LURVVEE it!

This ugly, it's real, and so very believable! I can't believe that he would only be evil in one sense, that something like this wouldn't occur to him. I mean... I am awed. I am moved. I am... in love.

I've said it before, but the characters are so fleshed out from the first word. Not JKR's vision in any sense, but yours.

Have I said thank you? Because, man! I love you! Thank you so much! Gifts from the dark, I mean, heart mean so much more. *grin*

xoxo