Thanks :) I couldn't resist with the ending, subverting the typical "walking off down a random woodland road chatting" end scene from the TV show with a bit of femslashiness ;)
wait there's gotta be more more more!!! please!!! this is too good!!! fantastic!! XD
please write more, a sequel, a new chapter, something!!
i loved it. please more!
ok, fangirl-exclamation-moment over for a second, i liked the way you wrote the characters and how you had them deal with their feelings. that they didn't have to say much, but it was all there. like some super-master-subtext. now i guess i really want something more than subtext, so that's what i'm asking. pretty please?
it was all very fantastic up until this point, i wonder what happens when they actually have to deal with these feelings. and, well, richard...
Thanks - the fangirl exclamation stuff was most appreciated :) I'm glad you liked how it was written as I was deliberately trying to keep it in the style of the show and not run away with my own C/K fantasies ;) Maybe I will write another one where I indulge those...
I like your way of thinking much better than the show writers!!! They completely screwed up with Cara’s life in 2x21 and 22. Kahlan already proved that her determination, love and the magic of her blue eyes could turn things around in Denna ep. And it worked again! Liked how Cara was confused and remembering bits of her post M’S life. Even a chipmunk helped, may it rest in peace. Clever how you’ve included Dahlia into the fighting scene and thank you for not killing her-she was punished enough on the show. She is not that evil. Lol at Richie with Zedd, one just can’t say “no” and the second in 4 hours after a last meal is ready to crunch some bugs! And the Inn scene was priceless! Like in a good show the full force comes after the crisis- "Step away from her, Cara!" Please
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Thanks for all that feedback - as you said they completely screwed with both Cara and Dahlia in those last couple of eps so hopefully this went a little way to correcting that in a lovely femslashy way :D
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And LOL@Je T'Aime - I guess it was appropriate for the whole fight scene and now I've got it playing over in my head too!
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The ending is so cute.
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fantastic!! XD
please write more, a sequel, a new chapter, something!!
i loved it. please more!
ok, fangirl-exclamation-moment over for a second, i liked the way you wrote the characters and how you had them deal with their feelings. that they didn't have to say much, but it was all there. like some super-master-subtext. now i guess i really want something more than subtext, so that's what i'm asking. pretty please?
it was all very fantastic up until this point, i wonder what happens when they actually have to deal with these feelings. and, well, richard...
again, great work, write more =D
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Kahlan already proved that her determination, love and the magic of her blue eyes could turn things around in Denna ep. And it worked again!
Liked how Cara was confused and remembering bits of her post M’S life. Even a chipmunk helped, may it rest in peace.
Clever how you’ve included Dahlia into the fighting scene and thank you for not killing her-she was punished enough on the show. She is not that evil.
Lol at Richie with Zedd, one just can’t say “no” and the second in 4 hours after a last meal is ready to crunch some bugs! And the Inn scene was priceless!
Like in a good show the full force comes after the crisis- "Step away from her, Cara!" Please ( ... )
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