Yeah,Papa Bear Didn't Take It Too Well Either...

[sazzy_kitten]

Comments

[yaoi_ezi]

The lapdance turned sex scene was really hot and I enjoyed the added twist of them already knowing each other. I felt like the mpreg was just kind of slapped on at the end but it was funny to get Finn to faint.

[sazzy_kitten]

Well, I'm glad the smut was good for you. :) Yeah, them Mpreg really was an afterthought, mostly because fatebegins requested it and added that it would be nice. P: I wasn't exactly happy that it didn't tie in better, but oh well. Next time I'll try to do a better job on it. And it was fun to make Finn pass out. :D

Thanks for you comment! C: ♥

[way_to_the_end]

Oh this was great! I loved how they pretended not to know each other and that you couldn't guess until the end that they were together!

[sazzy_kitten]

Aw, thanks. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

[anonymous]

lol, this is so hilarious and hot...and the ending was perfect :)

[sazzy_kitten]

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked how it turned out. :D