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sbick

Just some writing...

Mar 12, 2011 18:38

Some stuff that isn't fanfiction.

I may post bits and pieces from now on. I wrote this way back in college, if anyone's interested in timeline or anything. There's also more to this, but I'm not happy with any of it, so no way in hell will I post anymore of this story, at least not until I find the time to edit it if not rewrite it...

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mmouse15 March 13 2011, 03:08:38 UTC

Very interesting and creepy idea.

sbick March 21 2011, 18:05:24 UTC

Thank you! I was totally going for creepy. I hope to have something more posted here, soon.

katje0711 March 13 2011, 05:16:06 UTC

Ohhh. I really like that.

sbick March 21 2011, 18:06:05 UTC

Thank you. I was very fond of this as a prologue-type thing, but never really got around to fleshing out the rest of the world in a way that satisfied me...

savagelove24 September 11 2011, 00:51:09 UTC

Nice! I think if you were to delete the connection to Peter Pan, the mermaid story could stand on its own, especially if you expand what you have already written. It would be a nice short horror story about mermaids who have degenerated from peaceful mermaids into sirens who seduce men into their lairs. Nice concept.

I hope you write more soon.

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