Ooh, that made me all sniffly. I don't remember Jacqui, but their relationship in this is wonderful. Also great job using the Buffy quote, most who use it sound really sloppy, like they couldn't figure out what to put there. In here it works.
Thanx guys, ur comments mean alot to me. Sorry if you feel i've left a cliffhanger, I didnt intend to.
I actually tried writting this so that Sara or Catherine found him but Jacqui seemed to work so much better. bloodanna- i knew i recognised it when i wrote it but couldnt place it, thanx for remindin me. will try to have the next bit ready soon, but have exams this week.
Yes, next part its Jacqui screaming at Nick. It's fun to write but I'm kinda feeling sorry for Nick, might give him the chance to redeem himself. I made you cry? ...thats kinda cool....sorry!
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I actually tried writting this so that Sara or Catherine found him but Jacqui seemed to work so much better.
bloodanna- i knew i recognised it when i wrote it but couldnt place it, thanx for remindin me.
will try to have the next bit ready soon, but have exams this week.
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In other words, nice job. Does that mean we're going to get another part with Jacqui bitching Nick out?
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I made you cry? ...thats kinda cool....sorry!
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