You post them faster that I can read them! :D Well, 2 chapters at once, I'm not complaining! I really feel fot Trowa in this one. Well, for Heero, too, but in a different way. Trowa unwelcomed feelings are more... tragic, here.
I'm going to try to post another chapter today, too :)
I also think Trowa is the more tragic figure in the story. Heero has his feelings worked out, but he thinks they're in vain. Trowa is still fighting his :( That's definitely a sad thing, and I'm glad that got conveyed in the story :)
I know that I should feel sorry for Trowa, but I'm having too much fun watching him trying to fight his feelings. Quatre doesn't seem to be discouraging him in even the slightest way.
I should have known why Duo reacted the way he did. It makes sense that he'd be from that kind of area. I like the way you're working in touches of GW canon, like Duo's background and Trowa and Quatre playing musical instruments.
I love AU stories, but my favorite ones have some elements of canon in them. I think that Duo's background is one of those integral parts of his personality. It shaped so much of his character. Conversely, I could never write Quatre as growing up poor, either :D
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I really feel fot Trowa in this one. Well, for Heero, too, but in a different way. Trowa unwelcomed feelings are more... tragic, here.
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I also think Trowa is the more tragic figure in the story. Heero has his feelings worked out, but he thinks they're in vain. Trowa is still fighting his :( That's definitely a sad thing, and I'm glad that got conveyed in the story :)
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I should have known why Duo reacted the way he did. It makes sense that he'd be from that kind of area. I like the way you're working in touches of GW canon, like Duo's background and Trowa and Quatre playing musical instruments.
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