What does it say about me that I wish Quatre is in fact a manipulative bastard? (still want a happy ending, though! :D) Guess I just like slighty!evil!manipulative!Quatre and feel it would be even more better because od the age difference...
This was excellent. The way you wrote that last scene of them together was especially good. It had a lot of emotion, but you didn't use the usual catch phrases authors have for describing m/m sex. It's always nice to read a sex scene that feels fresh.
I'm worried that Trowa and Quatre won't be able to keep their relationship a secret. If someone was able to find Quatre before, chances are good that they can find him again...
Thanks!!! I'm really glad it didn't sound cliche. I know exaaactly what you mean by catchphrases. I think I've read so many bad lemons that there are certain words now that instantly leave a bad taste in my mouth (no pun intended O_o). This was the first 3x4 lemon I've ever written, too, so I was nervous, haha.
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I'm worried that Trowa and Quatre won't be able to keep their relationship a secret. If someone was able to find Quatre before, chances are good that they can find him again...
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