This was beautifully written! You drew such an incredible picture with the dilapidated house and the outcast within. But does Andres have to go!? Can he come back? Does he come back? Is there a happily ever after?! I need to know!
**i am smiling like a loon at your comment* thank you so much! it was meant to be a bit longer but i could not motivate myself to write it, maybe one day! thanks again for your lovely lovely comment
This is a near-perfect portrayal of what the world would see if neither of them were famous footballers, what with Victor's imposing stature and Andrés' supposed innocence and sweetness...
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Lovely characterization :)
I'd love to know what happens next :)
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Lovely characterization :)0** dances with happiness
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