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Title: Nothing Left to Save - Part 5/5

Oct 23, 2011 00:07

Title: Nothing Left to Save - Part 5/5
Author: Scarbandit
Rating: NC-17
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Puck/Kurt
Genre: Angst/abuse
Warning: non-con
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Disclaimer: I wish I could claim!
Author Notes:
Summary: Kurt is a teenager that's witnessed and been victim to a lot of hurt in his life. Puck is a teenager who's lost the will to fight ( Read more... )

author: scarbandit, livejournal, writing the fic i didn't write challenge, nc-17, series: nothing left to save, multipart wip

Comments 2

What happens next? scarbandit October 23 2011, 07:12:06 UTC

This was my first fiction and I couldn't think of how to end it! If you have ideas and want to write an ending, be my guest!

Hope you enjoyed!
Scar

lazorsaurus November 2 2012, 03:59:54 UTC

poor puck. what a rough life. i'm glad that he's getting a happy ending. it was interesting to see your comment because, yes, the ending did feel a little abrupt. guess you never continued it. :)

i have a piece of concrit if you're still checking out this lj. sometimes the dialogue felt rather stilted. the characters often said things i just couldn't imagine them saying. for example, mercedes told kurt, "i just love your fashion sense, kurt." it seemed a bit unnatural. something to consider for your future fics. :)