Fic: Uno, part two

[scarlet_paire]

Fandom: Heroes
Title: Uno, part two
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Drama/Romance/Songfic
Music: Uno -- Muse
Pairing: Gabriel Gray/Sylar X Mohinder Suresh (Mylar)
Spoilers: Up to 1X23, How to Stop an Exploding Man
Summary: "Mohinder means nothing to me."
Disclaimer: No, I do not own Heroes. If Heroes was mine, we would see all the interaction between Sylar

Comments

[catoasapun]

Awwww, I like!

'It means nothing. Mohinder means nothing.

He repeated the mantra along the way to Dale’s house, trying to persuade himself it was true.'

I really adore that line, I think it perfectly captures how Sylar thinks. Like, saying it makes it true.

The song lyrics really worked and flowed well with the story; you did a great job. ^_^

[scarlet_paire]

Thank you! I was really scared with this fic because English is not my first language. I'm glad you liked!

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[electriblonde]

Whoooaaa... I cried. Okay, so I'm still crying. it conveyed this beautiful, painful heartbreak without seeming to pretentious. God, on of the best I've ever read.

[scarlet_paire]

*blush* Thank you! I don't think this fic is really good, but I'm glad you liked!

[megmatthews20]

Oh my God! This is great!

I wish this were canon...sooo sooo bad...

And the idea of Sylar wanting Mohinder to die with him is so creepily sexy...and strangely beautiful...

Wonderful!

cheers :)

[scarlet_paire]

*laughs* Hehehe, no one can say this is not canon! We don't know what happened in Sylar's head... Thank you!

[levitatethis]

Thanks for posting this! I like the quick steps you take through how Mohinder/Sylar came to be, starting with Sylar/Chandra.

You've done a nice job with that moment when Mohinder and Sylar first come face to face and Mohinder seems to totally not be what Sylar is expecting...what really works well in this story though is how Sylar is constantly putting the blame on others (Chandra, Eden and then Mohinder...so much against Chandra and Mohinder) for what he becomes...for the actions he chooses to use. For all of his incredibly destructive power, depending on a given situation he will not always accept the responsibility of his actions. It's something I actually find very intersting about him and I like that it is a repeted theme throughout this story.

[scarlet_paire]

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment! This is how I imagine Sylar: he does not feel guilty, the others are to blame. And there's the music; Uno talks a lot about putting the blame on others. Again, thanks!

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

*sniffs, wipes eyes* This was so heartbreaking. Poor Sylar, always wanting something slightly out of his reach.

[scarlet_paire]

Thanks! At least, Sylar didn't die and he sees Mohinder again... XD