Comments | scarlettblush: Fic: come as you are [Erik/Charles] 1/3

scarlettblush

Fic: come as you are [Erik/Charles] 1/3

Aug 03, 2011 15:40

Title: come as you are
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 16.3 K
Warning: Lots of Austen + Pride and Prejudice. Avert your eyes if it's not your thing.
Summary: Hospital AU. The one where Charles unknowingly woos a coma patient with Pride and Prejudice. Years later, they meet again.( ‘What’s his name?’ she asks. And Charles, without even thinking, rubs his thumb over the boy’s brow, wondering what colour his eyes could possibly be. ‘Erik.’ )

x-men first class, au, erik/charles

Comments 41

papercutperfect August 3 2011, 15:02:49 UTC

Oh god, cliffhanger! D8

This is adorable and beautiful and OHMYHEART.

I wish I'd had a Charles to come read Jane Austen to me. I had to do it myself, dammit.

This is wonderful, can't wait for more.

scarlettblush August 3 2011, 15:14:36 UTC

god, I fucking love your icon. tis very appropriate. :D

I wish I had a Charles to read to me too, lucky Erik. Thank you for the lovely comment. :D

artsyslasher August 4 2011, 05:19:14 UTC

i freaking love your icon!

avictoriangirl August 3 2011, 15:25:55 UTC

Oh, great start, can't wait for more! :)

scarlettblush August 4 2011, 10:58:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to know you're liking it so far. :D

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scarlettblush August 4 2011, 10:58:44 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. :D Glad you're liking it so far.

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scarlettblush August 4 2011, 10:59:41 UTC

Aah, yes, Mr Darcy is swoon worthy. Glad you're liking it so far. :D

sirona_gs August 3 2011, 17:58:12 UTC

Read this on AO3, but for some reason I don't tend to leave comments there -- BUT I LOVED IT, SERIOUSLY. I hope there's moar soon! OMG Charles serenading Erik with P&P quotes jkahfjakfhg;fhg BE STILL MY HEART. <33333

(Btw, and I hope I'm not being too forward/creepy-stalker-ish, but I noticed you had some typos and auch left over -- if you're looking for someone to go over it and future parts, I cannot volunteer strongly enough! ^___^)

scarlettblush August 3 2011, 19:02:18 UTC

No, no, you're not being too forward! Thank you for pointing it out.

I can read these things so many times but still miss out on stuff. I was actually going to check the beta list on erik/charles . My regular beta has gone abroad, and I'd much rather her enjoy the time than worry about this.

Oh my goodness, yes I'd love to send you this! But are you sure?

sirona_gs August 3 2011, 19:42:24 UTC

VERY, VERY SURE. GIMME. *grabby hands* You can send it me at nhris18 AT gmail.com.

scarlettblush August 3 2011, 20:54:10 UTC

Have sent it. :D