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May 19, 2011 00:30

prom

onsica / pg-13 / romance / 2085 words
for lastco, from the kpophet fanfic request post! inspired by the song teenage dream by boyce avenue. my first het fic, haha. (: a bit cheezy, and i don't know if i did well, but hope you guys enjoy it!

a teenage dream. )

fandom: snsd, fandom: shinee

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eesor May 19 2011, 10:25:34 UTC
key should've been the queen.

dfdfgfdgfgafffsfdfdf. dying. it was nice and a tad different from all the onsica fic i've read so far. so i like it. also, i kind of love the part where yoona was mentioned (and back stabbed in a way. :P) i would quite, but i'm sort of bad at it. XD

and about the lj cut... you know the icon in between the lj poll and insert/edit table? that's the lj cut. you highlight the things you want under the cut and that's all there is to it.

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scarredknees May 19 2011, 15:08:33 UTC
ROFL that would definitely have been more fun.

lol don't get me wrong, i love yoona, i just had to backstab her~ xD i'm so happy you like it! <3 (:

i got that, but thanks! <33333

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sowons May 19 2011, 11:26:04 UTC
jkadhsajhd okay i'm gonna give myself a spot here!

and about the original lj layout... journal → journal style → customize your theme → display → disable customized comment pages for your journal → yes

is that what you mean? hehe sorry if it's not!

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sowons May 19 2011, 13:27:23 UTC
hkasdhkajh i really liked this! /weeps

onew is all awkward and shy and cute and jessi is all graceful and stunning and breath-taking sob SO ADORBS

ngl i grinned throughout the fic like an idiot lmao onew stuttering!!!

i notice things. things that are meant to be noticed,” and with that, jinki smiled sheepishly.
HEHEHEHEHE

she hit him playfully with the high heels in her hands.
idk why is this so qt to me lol

so all in all i enjoyed this & thank you for writing this!!!♥♥

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scarredknees May 19 2011, 15:11:17 UTC
yay thank you! that's exactly what i meant. <3333 thanks so much. sorry if i'm such a noob. ): i was supposed to give you a spot but then i stupidly forgot, lol. xD

i'm grinning throughout your whole comment i'm so happy that you liked it ;~~~;
THE IMAGE OF SICA JUST HITTING HIM WITH HIGH HEELS IS QT 2 ME 2!!! adorable.

thanks so much for liking this, i was kind of nervous for your reaction! ;~; so so glad you enjoyed it. <3333 ;3333;

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nileyna May 19 2011, 14:16:05 UTC
Oh, I love this so much! Especially this: 'jinki just wasn't the type to be noticed. not even with contact lenses on instead of black-rimmed glasses and puffy hair matted down with one and a half pots of styling gel.' THIS PART IS ♥. Post at shineeshidae? :)

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scarredknees May 19 2011, 15:12:51 UTC
omg i'm in love with your writing so you have no idea how much you flatter me right now. ;3;
THANK YOU FOR READING AND HAPPY YOU LIKED IT. <3

yes, yes, thank you for suggesting that. <3 will do in a while. (:

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thyluvlyname212 May 19 2011, 23:30:14 UTC
hehe yesh~ :)

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scarredknees May 20 2011, 03:48:11 UTC
does that mean you liked it? xD
thanks for reading/commenting! (:

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teokki May 20 2011, 19:13:18 UTC
sdljgsldjf /cries
this is so so lovely. i love how you portrayed both jessica and jinki, and key was wonderful! thank you so much for sharing this, i'm definitely memming. ♥

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scarredknees May 21 2011, 04:54:14 UTC
omg rly?! ;3; i'm so thankful, i actually thought my characterizations were a bit messy ;3;
this is the first time my work has ever been mem'd omg i'm like flailing rn tysfm!!!! ilu ;3;

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teokki May 21 2011, 05:11:40 UTC
sldkghsfdh /creepy but omg you're so cute. XD ♥ please keep up the good work, ne!

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scarredknees May 21 2011, 05:27:29 UTC
;A; YOU'RE TOO NICE AHGFKSSNDHJEIDBXH;
i'll try my best, thank you so much <33333333

you're my new favorite person omg ;3;

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