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Fate Averted - Chapter Eight

Jun 04, 2006 19:32

Well, it's been a little while, but hopefully you all are still with me on this story. :)

This part was a little hard to write in some ways. The first part more than the rest, because while panic and desperation are really ingrained in this version of Nathan, it's still hard to write this bad, you know ( Read more... )

nathan/haley, fate averted

Comments 5

Wow wailuku June 5 2006, 03:54:07 UTC

I get so excited whenever you update a story. I actually re-read parts of Getting it All Back. I love this story so much. It was so heartbreaking so read of Nathan being in the same room as Haley and Katie. The fact that you had Keith leave the room was great. It was like it was Nathan's time with them and only he should experience it. The way Katie kept looking at him was rather interesting, they say babies can see all kinds of things and just maybe Katie saw him. I can't help but feel that Nathan would have taken the second chance after this chapter, but I don't know what'll happen in the next. It kinda seems like something bad is about to happen. I hope he does choose the do-over and maybe he can be happy. Please update again soon.

starsnlights June 5 2006, 05:29:12 UTC

I posted this on the RC as well, but ( ... )

sugangel7 June 5 2006, 06:33:51 UTC

This was a beautiful chapter. Heart-breaking but absolutely beautiful ( ... )

medineamory June 5 2006, 15:35:44 UTC

This will be a little feedback comment, considering the fact that I am off to dinner with the family, and I think my mascara is ruined. Look what you are doing to me, Brynne. This is just so tragic, and at the same time so pure.

I really want Nathan to have his other lifetime, I want to see him doing everything he did differently. I am really rooting for that.

Oh, god; this story is so heartbreaking, and one of the best stories I have ever read.

I just lurked at your personal LJ, and I read that you wanted to write a book one day. And me, I will be looking out for you! Goals are good to have, and with your writing skills, then I believe you can do it.

Thank you!

babyjamesismine June 15 2006, 16:52:17 UTC

awww Brynne *sighs* SO sad, but so well written, for fanfiction it doesnt bother me as much if there's other stuff going on, like babies with other men, and if people are giving you a hard time about any part of this story just dont listen to them because really this story is so well written and has depth and emotion and thats all that matters. I cant wait to see what it is that's "worse ( ... )