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k_lafferty February 18 2008, 20:25:18 UTC
Ah, Brynne, how I love thee ( ... )

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sugangel7 February 18 2008, 20:43:21 UTC
Oh my gosh, do you have any idea how much I love you after this? Oh gosh. I love love love that they talked about it and that Haley was finally ready to admit that she loved him again. You've progressed it all up to this point beautifully. I knew it would only be a matter of time and with Nathan's persistence and his efforts (with AP classes, working, etc.) to start a better life combined with their overwhelming love for each other, aww...well of course, Haley would let him in again ( ... )

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romi_ap February 19 2008, 04:55:20 UTC
I've been very bad at leaving comments, but gah! I love this story, I started reading it a long time ago and when you started to update a few weeks ago, it made me all sorts of happy ( ... )

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lorilozz February 19 2008, 07:22:46 UTC
OMG! You are officially my favourite person right now! That was amazing. The moment we've all been waiting for has arrived and it was perfectly paced and well worth the wait. I loved everything about this chapter especially the first Naley scene and Pete's interruption. Damn that guy is funny. I adored Haley putting Deb in her place. Her fierce protectiveness over Nathan makes my heart melt and I love that he feels safe enough with her to be so vulnerable. Nathan's worries about the Luke/Pete relationship were so heartbreaking. He really hasn't had much experience with real friendships and having much self-worth other than being the BMOC, and this really showed through with his fears about the other two liking each other more than him ( ... )

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jllover05 February 24 2008, 23:11:59 UTC
I was talking to Dawn and couldn't remember if I had left you a review or not, so I thought I would look and to my surprise I forgot to leave you one least week.

Okay so I absolutely loved this update :) I am so glad that they finally talked about what happened, and about Nathan's plan. It was good for them to get it all out in the open. Darn Pete for interrupting them lol.

I'm glad that Haley went with Nathan to see Deb. Good thing she was there to put Deb in her place :)

The end was adorable!! Like Kris said I could totally see it playing out in my head. I loved that even though she was nervous, at the end she just didn't care about anyone else but him.

Awesome update as always! Can't wait to read the next chapter... I'm hoping we get one today :)

~Ashley

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