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'Approaching Normal' - Chapter Ten

Dec 15, 2008 19:29

( When the world falls down around you, where do you turn? )

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Grest story anonymous December 27 2008, 13:38:08 UTC

Hi Brynne,

I've just caught up with your story. And I love it (just like all the other of your stories). You are so talented in writing. I love that Haley is giving Nathan a had time and somehow a cold shoulder. So Karen is sick. Can't wait to read how this is going to work out. I don't know if Nathan will be on the plane or following her to California or what is on his mind. Can't wait to read more.
I hope you've had a great christmas and I wish you a happy new year. May all your wishes come true.
Nadine

anonymous January 17 2009, 03:14:10 UTC

I really love this story as well as your The Limit. PLease post another chapter soon b/c I'm so anxious to find out what happens. Your portrayal of the characters is fantastic as you put them in semi-au circumstances. Really enjoying all your work. Laura

Loving this story!! maracasgirl January 27 2009, 16:19:00 UTC

Hi Brynne, I'm loving this story so much. The conversation from the cafe to the airport is great because Nathan got the chance to clue Haley in on his true feelings...notwithstanding the tragedy of their initial break-up/breakdown....from the time they broke up years ago to present time. I like that you specifically brought up that Nathan is not trying to recapture past love but wanting to create/build a new love based on a much deeper and unbroken connection between the two of them. Let's face it, they are two very changed human beings as a result of their very emotional break-up and consequent life challenges. So the reliving of past lives is not possible or even wanted. Haley should understand that.

I also love Nathan's persistence in telling Haley that he will do anything to get her back including coming after her in California. Gosh! True love is heart-warming!!!

I feel for Karen and Lucas and her cancer battle. I know she will fight hard to win that battle.

Please Please give us an update. It would be much appreciated.

Finish It. anonymous March 26 2009, 13:30:28 UTC

Are you ever going to continue with this story?

anonymous April 2 2009, 14:11:25 UTC

Can you just send us a quick note to let your readers know if you're going to finish this wonderful story? The story is at such a turning point that your readers are anxious to know if we're ever going to find out how this ends.

I know there are many things in our busy lives that can keep us from completing things that are low priorities to us, but if you take the perspective that your story could give others just a few minutes of relief from the stresses of everyday life....then that's something worth considering, isn't it??? I wish I could write a Nathan/Haley story as well as you, then I'd do just that....but....

Thanks anyway, a Fan.