Scent & Sensuality Chapter Four

[underlucius]

Chapter One by underlucius, Chapter Two by gehayi, Chapter Three by anonymous

Comments

[wildestranger]

Oooh! Bitter Sirius! Stoic but raging in the iniside Remus! Distraught Draco! And, the most tanatlising figure of all, highwayman Ginny! This is so good, the possibilities for plot and angst and porn just keep multiplying! Utterly brilliant, can't wait to see what happens next. This is by far my favourite chapter. :)

I'm slightly confused by the quotation marks in the first part, and the tense (past or present?) in the second though, but nevertheless, am in awe of the sheer brilliance of this chapter. If only Regency Romances were actually this good...

[underlucius]

Hee! Thank you so much! It's such fun to write - writes itself, as there are so many directions.

sorry about the quote marks, have taken them off - and the tense - I know - I should have changed it, but it seemed more right to be almost talking to the reader. Sorry if it jarred!

Very glad you are enjoying it though!

*hug*

xxx

[wildestranger]

Just realised, Udolpho! Which I should have noticed earlier as I'm reading The Mysteries Of at the moment, but that just adds to the atmosphere in such a delightful way. And have pimped this in my journal. *loves*

[roz_morgan]

I have no idea were to start from in tell you how much I adore this. I wish Sirius would just stop being such a bastard and take Remus in his arms but then this would be over much quicker than intended. Ginny was the most suprising in this and I can't wait to see more of her highwaymaning.

[underlucius]

Yes. Cold nasty Sirius - just how I imagine him to be when he started school in fact, before Gryffindor rubbed the hard edges off him. I'd like them to be shagging too - but not my go again for ages!

So Glad you liked it!Please pimp to your friends!

xxx

[underlucius]

Yes, Draco is quite mad I think. Portraits and statues are all he has to talk to. I feel quite sorry for him.

Thank you so much for commenting and liking!

*hugs -hope you feel better*

xxx

[musesfool]

Whee! Highwayman Ginny! I love it. And cold-bastard-with-a-secret-torment!Sirius. *sniffs* Poor Remus.

[underlucius]

*giggles*

All Your Fault.

I hope that someone runs with the secret torment - glad you picked up on it!

Thanks for kind comments - *hug*

xxx

A deft turn of phrase

[jazzypom]

I do like reading your stories because you seem to enjoy telling them. There's a certain way in how you twist your words and leave me sobbing for more.

Mayhap I say, I do like your Sirius? He's distant and cold and damnable and sneering. And yet... Sirius my pet, what ails thee?

That exchange between Sirius and Remus rocked my socks like a rocking thing - and you had to write this in a pinch hit? It beggars belief what you'd have done if you'd had time.

Thanks for making my day brighter. :)

[underlucius]

Aw shucks! But you are right - when I like a story, I do really enjoy telling it, even when depressing fandom in one swift move!

Thank you so much

xxx