Song...

[scharf]

I was bored, and listening to love songs so I felt like writing a tragic song of my own... so here goes... let me know what you guys think

Comments

Rachel's Review ;)

[anonymous]

This is a wonderful example of how not to write a song. The whole idea of it was terrible and it should be burned to pieces. heheh just kidding....guess who i was impersonating? lol :p

but really now...i thought i was really good. My favourite part was when you said :
so i kneel before you
my heart in your hands
the offer of redemption
made up in one last dance

You show a lot of good emotion in your poetry. Good as always. Keep it up! Luv rachel

Re: Rachel's Review ;)

[scharf]

Thank you Rachel :)

You always know how to cheer up a depressing person lol ;)

[delirium_dream]

Kyle, I think it is really good. :)

Sweet

[anonymous]

dude that song is pretty kick butt, you should get it copy righted haha